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Letting Go – chapter 11
‘Girlfriend? Bette has a girlfriend? Then why would
From the way Cecilia saw Bette and Tina walking together earlier, she could tell that they were more than just friends, but she had to be sure. As soon as she said “Bette’s girlfriend,” she got the reaction she knew she was going to get out of Tina, jealously.
‘Yup, she like’s Bette alright.’
“Hi…nice to meet you,” was all Tina could say at the moment. Her mind was still filled with the words “Bette’s girlfriend,”
‘Oh my God, I don’t want Tina to misunderstand and think Cecilia is serious,’ was all Bette could think, as soon as Cecilia finished her own imaginative introduction, Bette quickly jumped in and said “Tina, she’s joking, we’re just friends, we’re not together.”
‘Yup, Bette likes her too,’ was Cecilia’s next observation when she heard Bette jump out with an explanation.
Cecilia looked back to Bette and said firmly “Not yet,” and let out a sly smirk.
Bette now felt the need to explain herself. She had no intentions of being with Cecilia, ever again. She wanted to be with Tina and Tina only. Her mind was now filled with frustration and anger, but she had to calmly explain to Tina.
“Tina, don’t listen to her, we’re…she’s…you’re the…” Bette was stumbling on her own words as she didn’t know what to say to Tina. Was there a reason to explain herself? After all, she and Tina weren’t a couple, she’s happily dating Eric, and *****, he’s going to propose.
Tina was now beyond confused and jealous, she was slightly heated. ‘What the ***** makes you think we’re not together?’ but she had to keep her cool, she couldn’t let Cecilia get to her, she couldn’t let Cecilia win. Bette belonged to Tina and Tina only!
Tina worked her courage and gave Cecilia a stern look and asked “What makes you think that Bette isn’t MY girlfriend?”
Bette’s jaw opened and practically dropped to the ground. She never would have thought that Tina would be and could be so bold. ‘MY girlfriend’ was all Bette could think.
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(55 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
This rocks! I love the introduction of Cecilia to kick TIna’s attraction for Bette into full gear. Your cliffhangers kill me but this one has got my imagination going…. Excellent writing! Write more soon please!
wow! who lets an ex tag along on a hot new date???! anyways, i guess this was required to get them ‘shoulder to shoulder, hip to hip…….’!lol!
DAMN SMILES, I thought that was FABULOUS….KEEP IT UP….THANKS
yeah T, claim your woman!! Love it, smile. this story just get better and better. Are u sure cecilia wasn’t recruited by alice to help the 2 silly ladies get close? hey no worries abt the cliff hangers. I kind of like them at times. It gives me something to look forward to in the story. keep it up, you are doing great!
Wow! Was Tina drinking liquid courage with her lunch? BOLD moves for a “straight girl”…but I guess you know what you want when you see it and there is no need to be subtle. LOL, can’t wait for the next chapter!
hot dayum i did like this chappy much better whoda thunk tina had it in her so be so up so soon. nice, really nice. do it again please.
Le comportement de Cecilia oblige Tina à sortir de sa timidité et à montrer à Bette ses sentiments. Bette semble faible et laisse faire Cecilia ce qu’elle veut. J’attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience. Merci pour cette histoire.
Oh Yeeaaaaahhh!!!! That’s right, Tina! Claim your woman!!! Now, go tell that b*tch to step off!!! Great chapter!
AND!!!
I’m so glad Tina found her fighting spirit. Sorry to say, but Cecilia does not have a chance with Bette. Can’t wait for B&T to get it going. Kiitos!
Damn I think you really want to kill me about your cliffhanger, please I can’t take it anymore, its to much lol. Ok but please post soon the next one, this is getting more interesting and excited and can’t wait to see more. And you are not nice to you fans but we love you, post soon please. Thanks!
nice…leave us hanging again. Good job. :) Love this story. This B&T are so cute.
*cough* My specialization is history *cough* my azz….LOL!!
Smile, you continue to do wonderfully; now Tina just needs to do what she is in that bathroom doing right now….claiming what’s hers!
I get the feeling we may see a good bit of Cecilia; but IMO, she’s about as important a presence as Eric…..NOT!
post again soon
Hanging here||| That was too cool. Bam out of no where comes Cecilia, and our Ms. Tina who can’t even figure out how all of a sudden she likes women, let alone Bette, is like hey bitch thats mine. LOVE IT. Post again,post again.
Yeah! You go T!
WOW…what the f*ck…how can you leave us like this….just an amazing update…now this Cecilia is sure trouble for Bette, but what the hell…let the show continue please.
And regarding chapters..don´t feel obligatet to post many. I have only postet 25 so keep it down ok. Hopefully I´ll post today and I want more of your story here so please post soon
ugh! another cliffhanger. Must you torture me this way? Cecilia was written nicely into the story.
Smile, I’m all smiles with this ending. I love how she says,”You’re mine.” You go girl. I like the little drama that’ll make both Tina and Bette stop fumbling and muttering and finally start addressing the feelings between them. But please keep Cecilia… I don’t want any real feelings of love between the two but having her constantly there fighting for Bette’s attention is gonna be great! I want to see Tina step up to the plate and fight for what she wants…tired of Bette always having to be the predator…time for her to be the prey!
Aw c’mon on!!You ended the chapter there?? That’s just cruel (sob).
great chapter…but pls don’t leave us hanging like that, especially if you don’t intend on giving us another chapter right away….Not Nice!! patiently waiting
OMG… what a GREAT twist!!!! Hahaha.. gotta thank Cecilia for Tina’s aggresiveness :) but hey, you tease… I want more, like now!! hahaha
You’re gonna have to give me more spoiler :P in order for me to build a foundation for ‘the house’ *wink*
i had to go back to read all of your other chapters. OMG i love this story u had me hanging off the edge of my seat. cant wait to see wat happens. please POST SOON!!!!
wooo weeee let the fun begin..what’s up with the cecilla crazy chick, she must be pretty :p
Here’s a thought… Perhaps Eric and Cecilia can hook up – lol. Nothing better than the start of a new love affair. Thanks for a great story & yeah I’ll give you the “scent” story some time…
hahahah… there’s no way you gonna stop me from reading :P
good work!!!!!!!!