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Letting Go – chapter 11
Bette looked directly into Tina’s flaming eyes and gave an ‘I don’t know what she’s doing’ look. As Cecilia’s food was moving closer to Bette, she had no choice but to taste the food.
When Bette was chewing, Cecilia raised her napkin and gently wiped the edge of Bette’s lips, “Oops, you got some sauce on your lip.”
Tina had had enough; she excused herself and headed to the restroom.
“Tina, I…” Bette tried to explain, but what was there to explain? The whole time it was Cecilia making all the moves.
“Cecilia, what are you doing?” Bette asked.
“Look Bette, I’ve let you go once, I’m not letting you go again. I know you like Tina, but I’m not letting you go.” Cecilia gave a straight forward honest answer.
“Excuse me.” Bette tried to scoot herself out of the booth as she forced Cecilia out of her seat.
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Tina placed both her hands on top of the sink and looked at herself in the mirror.
‘What the ***** is wrong with you? Since when were you into Bette, since when were you into women?’
Tina could see the jealously raging in her own eyes, and her heart was pounding with anger. ‘Forget this Tina, you’re with Eric.’
The restroom door opened and it startled Tina.
“Tina…I…” Bette said as she opened the restroom door. Bette tried to say more, but it seemed like every time she was around Tina, no words could come out.
Tina stared passionately into Bette’s eyes as she began to walk towards Bette. Tina was getting closer and closer, and Bette could feel the lump in her throat enlarge, her feet tried to move to meet Tina, but she couldn’t. Bette stood there as Tina advanced. The two were now face to face, shoulder to shoulder, hip to hip. Tina continued to walk forward charging at Bette and forcing Bette to walk backwards until she hit the wall.
With Bette’s back hitting the wall, Tina lifted her left arm and rested her hand on the wall adjacent to Bette’s right shoulder. Tina’s right arm quickly snaked against Bette’s waist and pulled her in even closer as she whispered in Bette’s ear.
“You’re mine.” Tina removed her lips off Bette’s ear and…
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(55 votes, average: 3.96 out of 5)
This rocks! I love the introduction of Cecilia to kick TIna’s attraction for Bette into full gear. Your cliffhangers kill me but this one has got my imagination going…. Excellent writing! Write more soon please!
wow! who lets an ex tag along on a hot new date???! anyways, i guess this was required to get them ‘shoulder to shoulder, hip to hip…….’!lol!
DAMN SMILES, I thought that was FABULOUS….KEEP IT UP….THANKS
yeah T, claim your woman!! Love it, smile. this story just get better and better. Are u sure cecilia wasn’t recruited by alice to help the 2 silly ladies get close? hey no worries abt the cliff hangers. I kind of like them at times. It gives me something to look forward to in the story. keep it up, you are doing great!
Wow! Was Tina drinking liquid courage with her lunch? BOLD moves for a “straight girl”…but I guess you know what you want when you see it and there is no need to be subtle. LOL, can’t wait for the next chapter!
hot dayum i did like this chappy much better whoda thunk tina had it in her so be so up so soon. nice, really nice. do it again please.
Le comportement de Cecilia oblige Tina à sortir de sa timidité et à montrer à Bette ses sentiments. Bette semble faible et laisse faire Cecilia ce qu’elle veut. J’attends le prochain chapitre avec impatience. Merci pour cette histoire.
Oh Yeeaaaaahhh!!!! That’s right, Tina! Claim your woman!!! Now, go tell that b*tch to step off!!! Great chapter!
AND!!!
I’m so glad Tina found her fighting spirit. Sorry to say, but Cecilia does not have a chance with Bette. Can’t wait for B&T to get it going. Kiitos!
Damn I think you really want to kill me about your cliffhanger, please I can’t take it anymore, its to much lol. Ok but please post soon the next one, this is getting more interesting and excited and can’t wait to see more. And you are not nice to you fans but we love you, post soon please. Thanks!
nice…leave us hanging again. Good job. :) Love this story. This B&T are so cute.
*cough* My specialization is history *cough* my azz….LOL!!
Smile, you continue to do wonderfully; now Tina just needs to do what she is in that bathroom doing right now….claiming what’s hers!
I get the feeling we may see a good bit of Cecilia; but IMO, she’s about as important a presence as Eric…..NOT!
post again soon
Hanging here||| That was too cool. Bam out of no where comes Cecilia, and our Ms. Tina who can’t even figure out how all of a sudden she likes women, let alone Bette, is like hey bitch thats mine. LOVE IT. Post again,post again.
Yeah! You go T!
WOW…what the f*ck…how can you leave us like this….just an amazing update…now this Cecilia is sure trouble for Bette, but what the hell…let the show continue please.
And regarding chapters..don´t feel obligatet to post many. I have only postet 25 so keep it down ok. Hopefully I´ll post today and I want more of your story here so please post soon
ugh! another cliffhanger. Must you torture me this way? Cecilia was written nicely into the story.
Smile, I’m all smiles with this ending. I love how she says,”You’re mine.” You go girl. I like the little drama that’ll make both Tina and Bette stop fumbling and muttering and finally start addressing the feelings between them. But please keep Cecilia… I don’t want any real feelings of love between the two but having her constantly there fighting for Bette’s attention is gonna be great! I want to see Tina step up to the plate and fight for what she wants…tired of Bette always having to be the predator…time for her to be the prey!
Aw c’mon on!!You ended the chapter there?? That’s just cruel (sob).
great chapter…but pls don’t leave us hanging like that, especially if you don’t intend on giving us another chapter right away….Not Nice!! patiently waiting
OMG… what a GREAT twist!!!! Hahaha.. gotta thank Cecilia for Tina’s aggresiveness :) but hey, you tease… I want more, like now!! hahaha
You’re gonna have to give me more spoiler :P in order for me to build a foundation for ‘the house’ *wink*
i had to go back to read all of your other chapters. OMG i love this story u had me hanging off the edge of my seat. cant wait to see wat happens. please POST SOON!!!!
wooo weeee let the fun begin..what’s up with the cecilla crazy chick, she must be pretty :p
Here’s a thought… Perhaps Eric and Cecilia can hook up – lol. Nothing better than the start of a new love affair. Thanks for a great story & yeah I’ll give you the “scent” story some time…
hahahah… there’s no way you gonna stop me from reading :P
good work!!!!!!!!