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Letting Go – chapter 18
‘Ah, *****…’ Bette felt Tina’s finger moving again. This time, Tina had unbuttoned the first button of Bette’s top. Tina was ready to tease the ***** out of Bette, and drive her insane like Bette’s done to her. After unbuttoning that first button, Tina slid her fingers from left to right along Bette’s chest.
Two can play at this game! Bette’s arm which was still tightly wrapped around Tina’s waist began to unwrap itself slightly. It then found its way snaking up Tina’s bare back where her fingers too, slid up and down following the outline of Tina’s spine. No, two couldn’t play at that game, Bette was going to lose, and lose miserably. Her hand crawled up and finally rested on Tina’s shoulders from behind.
‘Yeah…she’s not wearing a bra?!’
The touches were making Bette and Tina crazy, but they refused to make that next move. They would tease until the other could no longer take it anymore. Bette finally lifted her face and moved those wet lips of hers from Tina’s lips onto her ears and she seductively whispered with a smirk “I know what you’re doing, and you’re not going to win, Tina.”
Tina’s fingers which were once teasing Bette, was now in a clenched fist as she grabbed onto Bette’s top for support after feeling Bette’s warm yet cool breath along Tina’s ear. Her own head leaned forward as she pressed her lips to Bette’s ear and whispered back “We’ll see about that, Bette.” Tina knew there was no way in ***** she could outlast Bette, it was a sure loss, but she couldn’t admit it either.
‘Damn right, we’ll see about that!’ Bette thought to herself, even though she knew she couldn’t outlast Tina.
Never has anyone gotten to her like this before, ever. Bette was terrified in falling for Tina, but at the same time, she couldn’t help herself. Bette sucked on Tina’s earlobe, and then quickly used the tip of her tongue and licked down onto Tina’s neck where she then started kissing. Each kiss leaving a wet trail on Tina’s neck causing chills every time the air blew against it.
Tina tilted her head back and closed her eyes in pleasure as she enjoyed every single moment of Bette’s touch. This seemed to be the end of Tina as she knew it. Never breaking the kiss, Bette then continued her assault as she pushed Tina to the nearby wall and trapped her in. Her fingers then found its way onto Tina’s inner thigh; stroking her fingers up and down, and each time stopping at a higher position than the previous.
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(41 votes, average: 3.83 out of 5)
Hahah, Joanna makes me think of my sisters. . .and I can’t help but laugh at her reactions sometimes. Chubby heart huh? Is that a full heart maybe? And is a skinny heart empty? Hmmm. . .things to contemplate while watching grass grow. . .HAha, please post again soon, I love this story!
someone just turned the turn the temperature up a notch. phew… hot.
Awwwwww Smile…I’ve missed you. Great update. Funny how “moms” show up unannounced, uninvited and unexpected….my mother does it often ;)
On a side note ~ snQQpy – Do you like Eric? If you do, take him away from Tina, PLEASE!
HELL NO! Smile, only you can prevent forrest fires….and that’s all Eric is. The sooner YOU remove him from Tina, the happier we’ll all be.
I’ve been waiting and hoping for a new chapter. Thank you for not forgetting us. This was great and I love Joanna’s reaction. I wonder how dumb Tina’s mom really is? Then again, she may be on denial. I hope this doesn’t bring drama into B&T starting relationship. Although, I’m afraid it will. But I suppose not everything can be smooth sailing. I was just hoping that these two could have a drama free beginning as a couple. Kiitos!
It is hott and they were going to take all their clothes off !lol they are so busted
Hey I’m really smiley right now to read this Story OMG! their are busted LOL! Please continue post soon Thanks!!
All children and parents are the same. The children want approvAL nd love . Most parents wantmwhat they think is best for the child and still boss them,, thanks
Yes Smile is back great…. Love the story.. This chapter is just so good….. Why don´t you like it?? I hope life will treat you with time to make another post soon:-)Take care of yourself…:o)
Have missed your posts great story great chapter!!!!
Tina wasn’t wearing any underwear either!?!?!
Wow.lol
I see why Bette lost…I would have given up too! I think the Joanna and Mrs. Kennard suprise is great ( interesting/unny as hell). Bette should sneak out the back window onto the firescape…just for kicks.
THE MESS OF LOVE…..GREAT GREAT CHAPTER…THANKS FOR NOT FORGETTING ABOUT US.POST AGAIN WHEN YOU CAN….
DAMS…this is good shit. Please post soon.
I love this story and this particular beginning. Post soon please.
Those two hot mamas need to be more considerate of others. (smile) Can’t wait to see what happens next. Please post soon. Loving this.
It’s either a that damned bell or someone interrupting B & T! Sorry I haven’t commented for so long, I just now got up to date with the story, and love it, love it, love it and love it. By the way did I mention that I love it? Be waiting.
why must you leave us hanging like that. Please don’t let them get caught be mom..shit.
this story just gets better
As long as you keep writing like that you can have any part of my brain you want. Although you have completely turned it into mush at the moment, she says breathing heavily. ;)
Great chapter, very sexy. I hope they don’t get busted by mom lol.
Question: Where is this story taking place?
I hope you post again soon, I love this story.
Wow..it’s getting good and hot in here!!
awwww lo lsoo cute!! heheh please post soon you rthe best!!!Lol thanx byeness<33823957389
Alright!!! so great keep it coming !!!!
AW,c’mon on…you ended it there!!?!?? Please smile can I have some more?
Yeah Smile is back and glad to see you. Damn this chapter is hot and beautiful and damn love it. Now mon in the door and they better stop make out before mom gonna kick their ass, and glad is Joanna see them first, if Mom see it she will die right there lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
What!?!?!?!?! Hahahaha… that was great… more than great !! :D
Hahaha… mess heh… yeah there’s a really big mess in there!!! Hahaha… what’s going on with their talk during the dinner? I’m really curious to know about that :P
Yess… you’re “sooper smartt” to know that I like that shirt :P
Sorry, was caught up with work… and had quite a bad day :( So I wasn’t able to read you mail until just now… and you’d posted it :) Anyway, you’re doing great without any of my suggestion :P
Wow, incredibly sexy!! Why does mom and sis have to ruin it?!? Go back home. (sorry, I can’t help myself) Great drama.
gawd smiley. your killing me. my mom never announces herself either, highly frustrating. please, get eric out of all of our miserys. tina and bette have craved their names into each other. you should never second guess yourself about this story. your doing a great job. thanks.