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Letting Go – chapter 18
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Tina was getting weaker by the second, if it wasn’t for the wall and Bette, she would have fallen over. Her legs were giving up on her and she felt as if she couldn’t stand for much longer.
“Baby…you’re…I…ah…” Tina moaned as the words refused to come out of her mouth.
Bette had to stop what she was doing to catch her breath. She looked at Tina, and as Tina slowly opened her eyes and caught her breath, Bette asked “What are you trying to do to me? You’re not wearing underwear either?”
Tina just tilted her head and gave a sly smirk as she replied “Nope.”
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Bette pressed her right hand against the wall, and leaned her head down resting her forehead on Tina’s shoulder, as she whispered in defeat “Okay, you win.”
Bette finally lifted her head and moved back two steps. As much as she didn’t want to stop, she knew they had to before things got too far. She smiled at Tina and said “Are you sure you’re feeling okay? I can grab you some food if you’re hungry.”
“Are you hungry Bette?” Tina asked as she pushed herself off the wall.
“Umm…a little bit.”
“Are you rushing to get home or go anywhere, Bette?”
Bette shook her head and said “No, remember? I’m here to take care of you tonight.”
“Well, if you’re hungry, I can make us some dinner. Do you want to go to the grocery store with me, or do you want to wait here?”
“Tina, I’m here to take care of you remember?”
“Bette, I’m fine, besides, I need to thank you for coming over and bringing me such beautiful flowers.”
“Mmm…okay, I’ll go to the supermarket with you then.” Bette said.
“Okay, I’m going to change, I’ll be right back.” Tina said as she gave Bette a quick peck on the cheek and shyly ran into her room.
“Umm…Tina?” Bette said, “I…I think we need to talk.”
“I know,” Tina shouted from her room, “We’ll talk during dinner about everything, is that okay?”
“Yeah,” Bette said as she saw Tina walking out of her room with her hair in a ponytail, wearing a hoodie sweatshirt, and sweatpants. Bette smiled and said “You look so cute.”
Tina squinted her nose and said “So do you! Come on, let’s go.”
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“Mmm…smells good,” Ms. Kennard said as she and Joanna were standing outside the apartment door about to enter in.
“Yeah, I guess Tina’s making dinner, YUM!” Joanna replied as she was sticking her key to the apartment keyhole, and opened the door with Ms. Kennard following behind her.
Taking no more than two steps, Joanna stopped dead in her tracks, and Ms. Kennard bumped into Tina’s back as she no longer had room to walk. Joanna quickly took two steps out and closed the door loudly on purpose.
“Oh, uhh….mom…it’s…it’s…really…messy in there. I don’t think you’ll want to go in just yet.” Joanna didn’t know what to say.
“Nonsense, it’s not like I’ve never seen this place in such a mess before. Come on, let’s get in, and get it cleaned up before Eric arrives.”
“Heh heh…okay…” Joanna said, as she began knocking on the door.
“Why are you knocking? Don’t you have the keys right there?”
“Uh-huh” Joanna just nodded as she prayed Tina heard the door, and would come answering it before her mom pushed it open.
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Hahah, Joanna makes me think of my sisters. . .and I can’t help but laugh at her reactions sometimes. Chubby heart huh? Is that a full heart maybe? And is a skinny heart empty? Hmmm. . .things to contemplate while watching grass grow. . .HAha, please post again soon, I love this story!
someone just turned the turn the temperature up a notch. phew… hot.
Awwwwww Smile…I’ve missed you. Great update. Funny how “moms” show up unannounced, uninvited and unexpected….my mother does it often ;)
On a side note ~ snQQpy – Do you like Eric? If you do, take him away from Tina, PLEASE!
HELL NO! Smile, only you can prevent forrest fires….and that’s all Eric is. The sooner YOU remove him from Tina, the happier we’ll all be.
I’ve been waiting and hoping for a new chapter. Thank you for not forgetting us. This was great and I love Joanna’s reaction. I wonder how dumb Tina’s mom really is? Then again, she may be on denial. I hope this doesn’t bring drama into B&T starting relationship. Although, I’m afraid it will. But I suppose not everything can be smooth sailing. I was just hoping that these two could have a drama free beginning as a couple. Kiitos!
It is hott and they were going to take all their clothes off !lol they are so busted
Hey I’m really smiley right now to read this Story OMG! their are busted LOL! Please continue post soon Thanks!!
All children and parents are the same. The children want approvAL nd love . Most parents wantmwhat they think is best for the child and still boss them,, thanks
Yes Smile is back great…. Love the story.. This chapter is just so good….. Why don´t you like it?? I hope life will treat you with time to make another post soon:-)Take care of yourself…:o)
Have missed your posts great story great chapter!!!!
Tina wasn’t wearing any underwear either!?!?!
Wow.lol
I see why Bette lost…I would have given up too! I think the Joanna and Mrs. Kennard suprise is great ( interesting/unny as hell). Bette should sneak out the back window onto the firescape…just for kicks.
THE MESS OF LOVE…..GREAT GREAT CHAPTER…THANKS FOR NOT FORGETTING ABOUT US.POST AGAIN WHEN YOU CAN….
DAMS…this is good shit. Please post soon.
I love this story and this particular beginning. Post soon please.
Those two hot mamas need to be more considerate of others. (smile) Can’t wait to see what happens next. Please post soon. Loving this.
It’s either a that damned bell or someone interrupting B & T! Sorry I haven’t commented for so long, I just now got up to date with the story, and love it, love it, love it and love it. By the way did I mention that I love it? Be waiting.
why must you leave us hanging like that. Please don’t let them get caught be mom..shit.
this story just gets better
As long as you keep writing like that you can have any part of my brain you want. Although you have completely turned it into mush at the moment, she says breathing heavily. ;)
Great chapter, very sexy. I hope they don’t get busted by mom lol.
Question: Where is this story taking place?
I hope you post again soon, I love this story.
Wow..it’s getting good and hot in here!!
awwww lo lsoo cute!! heheh please post soon you rthe best!!!Lol thanx byeness<33823957389
Alright!!! so great keep it coming !!!!
AW,c’mon on…you ended it there!!?!?? Please smile can I have some more?
Yeah Smile is back and glad to see you. Damn this chapter is hot and beautiful and damn love it. Now mon in the door and they better stop make out before mom gonna kick their ass, and glad is Joanna see them first, if Mom see it she will die right there lol. Ok post soon please, thanks!
What!?!?!?!?! Hahahaha… that was great… more than great !! :D
Hahaha… mess heh… yeah there’s a really big mess in there!!! Hahaha… what’s going on with their talk during the dinner? I’m really curious to know about that :P
Yess… you’re “sooper smartt” to know that I like that shirt :P
Sorry, was caught up with work… and had quite a bad day :( So I wasn’t able to read you mail until just now… and you’d posted it :) Anyway, you’re doing great without any of my suggestion :P
Wow, incredibly sexy!! Why does mom and sis have to ruin it?!? Go back home. (sorry, I can’t help myself) Great drama.
gawd smiley. your killing me. my mom never announces herself either, highly frustrating. please, get eric out of all of our miserys. tina and bette have craved their names into each other. you should never second guess yourself about this story. your doing a great job. thanks.