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Letting Go – chapter 19
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“I uhh…” This situation was suddenly getting weird for Bette.
“Oh, you must stay for dinner, Bette. You can meet Eric, Tina’s fianc.” Ms. Kennard jumped in.
“Eric? Eric’s coming over?! Why?” Damn it, how was Tina going to get out of this awkward situation?
“Yup, Eric will be over shortly, Tina!” Joanna says looking back and forth at Tina and Bette. “So you better run and hide!”
“Joanna!” Ms. Kennard looked over at her daughter, “Why would Tina want to run and hide?”
‘Because she hates the fool, and she’s in love with that girl, that’s why!’ Joanna thought to herself as she let out a chuckle laughing at her own comment. “I don’t know, Tina, why would you?”
Tina just gave Joanna a “shut-up!” look.
“Tina, is dinner almost ready? I’ll help you!” Joanna ran to the kitchen trying to talk with her before Eric arrived.
“What are you going to do?” Joanna whispered.
“I don’t know…” The two would be whispering back and forth.
“Well, you better think of something, he’s going to be here soon, and you know he’s going to push you into saying ‘yes’ right? Mom is his secret weapon.”
“I know…” Tina sighed.
“Hey, your girlfriend’s pretty hot!” Joanna turned her head around and checked Bette out.
“I KNOW!”
Ms. Kennard had pulled Bette over to the couch where they started chatting away. The more Ms. Kennard found out about Bette, the more she liked her daughter’s new “friend”
*Knock knock knock*
“I’ll get it!” Joanna ran to the door. She opened it, and as soon as she saw it was Eric, she shut the door in his face. “It’s Eric,” she turned around and announced.
“Why did you close the door on him?” Ms. Kennard got up as she wanted to let Eric in.
“I’m just playing,” Joanna opened the door before Ms. Kennard reached it. “Sorry, I was just messing around.” ‘Not really’ she mumbled under her breath.
“Hey, Joanna,” Eric himself, wasn’t too happy with Joanna. He just couldn’t figure out why she hated him so much.
“Bette?” Eric looked closely while she squinted his eyes making sure he wasn’t mistaken. “What are you doing here?”
Tina immediately turned around shocked, “You two know each other?”
“Yeah, I work for her father. How do you two know each other?”
“I work with her.”
“Oh, what a small world,” Ms. Kennard chimed in.
“Yeah, a damn small world.” Joanna shook her head as she spoke.
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Great chapter as always!!
OMG, I need a drink and I’m not even there. Tina girl you just gotta go for it, with everyone there otherwise this is going to get messy. Poor T. Great update, love Joanna maybe her and Alice should get together.
I smell some very good drama coming there way and I love every minute of it!!! Love Joanna!!!
ha ha ha thats awesome..it’s going to be one very interesting dinnerlol…keep posting lovin the story
whoa!!! i have a feeling tina isnt going to be happy about not knowing this o and btw i loooove jona lol shes soooo greaat hahah looooove her heeh ok well AMAZING chapter and please post soon thanx Byeness<339837259823759876389
ooooohh I love it. Perfect way to keep me hanging.
By the way. I’m a little scared to post it that’s why you haven’t seen it. I promise it’ll appear soon enough.
I love your narration in the story :
Yeah, Joanna was a biatch, so what, she was a fun biatch!
and yeah you were right this is better….
“You two know each other?”
and he works for Melvin?… oh boy…
great chapter and there is some drama on the horizon..I feel it.
albeez to tina. you cant even imagine what marrying for the wrong reasons is like. being with someone who obviously doesnt get you. just saying. it might be painful for a minute but dayum its so worth being honest. so be strong. you have bette and sis there for ya and will protect you.
Great chapter smile sounds like things are getting interesting post soon!!!!!
AHAHAHAHAHA! I LOVE this story! Please post again soon! Joanna reminds me of my younger sister.. . she is a biatch all right, but her comments never cease to crack me up. Well, unless they’re about me of course, then i just smack her. Haha, just kidding, I’m not abusive. . .well not really :) ANYWAY, keep em coming! Oh, and good luck on your test!
can’t wait to see how this dinner turns out-post soon
Wow and the drama begin…. Great Chapter:-) Tina be strong you can do it.. Bette help her… ok I love this story.. Keep the chapters comming… Please
ah small world indeed. can’t wait for your next post.
Great story! You really have a gift for writing. I totally know what you mean when it comes to the Praxis II. I just took my Curr. Inst. Asses. test last weekend! Agh!! Talk about a total stress relief for getting it over with. Best of luck to you on whatever Praxis II you are taking!!! =)
Hey this is getting so funny and intense LOL! I Love it Please continue post soon Thanks!
this was so funny dinner shjould be really intresting
wow! lol..I just caught up on the last 2 chapters and I must say you really know how to tease your readers!! lol I love that they are stuck now with Mom and Eric!! I love Joanna too, she’s a cool biach!!
The situation that is going on is real funny and interesting at the same time. Good Job.
Excellent. The dinner will be very interesting. Why are men so clueless sometimes…or most of the time? Hopefully Eric will see that there is something between T&B. And that he will not propose in front of them all. Then again, it would be interesting to see Tina refuse to proposal and give the exact reason for the refusal. Kiitos for another great chapter!
Damn drama is coming and its excited to see it, what Bette and Tina gonna do it. Damn Joanne is so fucking funny and love her. Ok let see whats next!
WOW Dramatic..that was Great!..So0o0o…wrth the wait..I luv Joanne..the typical evil sister..Tina needs sum wine – alcohol is liquid courage&confidence..& She needs 2 dump Eric’s ass Quick cuz that dude is annoyin..PLEASE mst Post so0N..
:D Goody… goody… goody…
Wow… all at one table, that’s gonna be really interesting especially with Joanna in it… :)
And wow… I really like the aggresive side of Tina :) she seems like the one making the first move all the time :)
Nooo… haven’t gotten my milkshake yet :( you still have leftover? Maybe you can post me some? hahaha
footsie under the table for bette & tina
Maybe Joanna can tell Eric to get the hell out of dodge and Bette can then tell him that her sister likes him. Too much. love it.
Oh Yeah, it’s going to be a great dinner..Does Joanne know Bette from somewhere?Maybe Joannne’s is a lesbian and hit on Bette???FABULOUS JOB SMILES.PLEASE POST SOON..THANKS
“…I tell myself not to give up on this story.”
Please, oh PLEASE do not give up! This is a great story…perfect mixture of drama and humour.
And now I’m left wondering how Tina’s going to handle this dinner…she’s already used her Fainting card…I suppose she could feign choking on the entree to keep avoiding the inevitable… nah, c’mon Tina, be strong!
Sorry I have been gone so long Smile…..love the updates you have postet for us…how is Tina going to get out of this one and will she tell the truth to everyone….as for my story..well it´s not doing great at all. I´m stuck…sorry, but do post soon