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Letting Go – chapter nine
Tina Kennard made her way back to the library as she opened the door of her car, she could feel the cold blistering wind charging towards her. Each new wave of wind became more brutal with stronger force; it was dry, so dry it felt like a cut every time the wind brushed against her. However, it contained a certain indescribable tenderness that brought her to serenity. Yes, that scent lingered in the bitter air and found its way into Tina’s senses, she felt cured, and the scent would serve as her depressant. Of course that feeling wasn’t going to be there forever, like the wind, it left just as fast as it came.
Tina let out a sigh of defeat and headed in towards the library for the second time today.
“Excuse me,” Tina said, as she entered the library and saw the elderly gentleman with a pair of glasses drooping down to his nose at the front desk.
Tina reached into her pocket and pulled out the charm. The warmth that surrounded the charm suddenly vanished when it came into contact with the world, and once again, it was ice cold.
As she placed the charm on the desk, she said “I found this outside.”
Tina was no thief, but she didn’t want to give up this charm, there was a connection and some how, she was afraid she would never get to see it again.
“Ah yes, two young ladies came in just a little while ago looking for this. I’ll be sure to give them a call.”
“Okay, thanks so much.” Tina was glad she did the right thing by giving it back, and she headed towards her car.
[End of flashback]
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While she was driving, Bette too, replayed the events that occurred today. She didn’t want to go home just yet. Her heart, for the first time in years had just opened up, and she wanted to share this joyful day with someone. Tell them all about Tina, and let them know how happy she could actually be.
Bette was playing a game of tug-of-war with herself. This pull and push factor was what made her so indecisive. For one, she knew she wanted to be with Tina, it wasn’t just some game. Tina was relationship material, and her feelings for Tina were beyond simple attraction, there was a connection, both physical and emotional. Then there was Tina’s beauty, she was the type of girl that everyone would want to settle down with, yes, the one that everyone would approve of. All those made Bette push herself closer into Tina.
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))