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    Letting Go – chapter nine

    Story written on August 21, 2005 by smile12345.
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    A Bette and Tina Beginning. Bette gets some weird advice.

     

    Bette took her eyes off the road for a split second and glanced over at her dashboard searching for the clock, it read 3:40. 

     

    “You know what Jamie, that’s perfect.  I’ll see you in a little bit!”

     

    “Okay, bye Bette.”

     

    The two women hung up the phone.

     

    At about 4:20 P.M., Bette strutted into the salon searching for her friend and stylist, Jamie.

     

    “Bette!” Jamie’s voice shouted as she ran over and gave Bette a hug.  Her smile was bright and genuine and her voice once again, made Bette feel at ease.  That’s why Bette felt so comfortable around her,

     

    “Hey, what’s up?” Bette asked as she reciprocated the hug.

     

    The hug was broken so Jamie could look at Bette when she replied to Bette’s question. 

     

    “Nothing, just chillin’ I’m sorry about this, it’s just, I have to fly to New York for a few days and I won’t get back until Friday.”

     

    “Is something wrong?” Bette’s voice filled with concern.

     

    Jamie escorted Bette to her seat for a hair wash, and began prepping her own supplies while replying, “No, I’m helping out with a photo shoot!  I’ll be styling hair for some of the biggest stars!”

     

    “Wow, congratulations Jamie!”  Bette was happy for Jamie, she had truly put in hard work and effort to get to where she was today.

     

    “Thanks, but I’m still really sorry though Bette, I would do Friday, but I’m totally booked and I am for the next month.”  Jamie continued, “Okay, Jen’s going to wash your hair, just come over when you’re done, k?”

     

    “Sure,” Bette replied as the warm water began running through her hair.

     

    People were frequently fooled by Jamie’s appearance.  She resembled a “party girl” who lacked a brain and was only interested in fashion, and this is why her talents were often overlooked and underestimated.  At the age of twenty-one, Jamie already built a name for herself in the cosmetology industry.  Her clientele list was full of elite aristocrats from the area, and her styling portfolio filled with celebrities.

     

    Besides her unbelievable styling talents, Jamie’s sense of fashion and style were among one of the many reasons why her clients loved her so much.  This so called “fashion guru,” knew her stuff.  What made Jamie even more in demand was her great personality, she had a terrific sense of humor, always telling jokes and constantly making people laugh, she was down to earth, and aside all this, she was gorgeous.  People often mistook her for being a model, and then were shocked to learn that she wasn’t.

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    1. Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D

      Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P

      Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.

      What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…

      Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?

      Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D

    2. Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    11. umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.

    12. K,
      loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?

      please post soon. love this beginning.

    13. Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.

    15. Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon

    17. sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.

      nzgrl interesting idea.

    18. HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU

    19. Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!

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