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    Letting Go – chapter nine

    Story written on August 21, 2005 by smile12345.
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    A Bette and Tina Beginning. Bette gets some weird advice.

     

    Of course when there’s a push, there’s a pull.  What if Tina didn’t feel the same way?  What if the end result meant getting hurt or worse, her heart completely shattered?  That was a risk too large to take, too much on the line to gamble on.  These were the reasons that made Bette pull herself back and away from Tina.

     

    Bette wouldn’t be able to move forwards or backwards.  She would be standing there forever waiting for Tina Kennard to make the first move.  Tina would have to become the aggressor, but would she?

     

    *Ring ring*

     

    The ringing of Bette’s cell phone startled her, it was a distraction Bette needed.  She reached down to find her cell phone, and as she grabbed it, she glanced at the external LCD screen and noticed that it was an unknown number.  Regardless, she picked it up.

     

    “Hello, this is Bette Porter,” Bette said in a questioning voice.

     

    “Hey Bette, it’s Jamie.”  The voice on the other end was cheery.

     

    Bette recognized the familiar voice immediately, and soon her tone too, became cheerful.  That’s just the type of person Jamie is, she has that affect on people.  Despite how people were feeling, Jamie’s optimism always put people at ease and in the best of moods.  A genuine smile found its way onto Bette as she replied back.

     

    “Hey Jamie, what’s going on?  Don’t tell me you’re calling to cancel.”

     

     

    “Well, not canceling, but we do have a little problem.”

     

    “Alright, when do you want to change it to?” Bette knew Jamie too well and already knew what she wanted to say before she said it.

     

    “I know this is last minute, but…can we change your Thursday appointment to say…today at 4:15?”

     

    Bumping Bette’s appointment ahead of schedule seemed just the right thing to do, Bette wasn’t in the mood to go home, and she did want someone to talk to about Tina, who better than Jamie?

     

    Bette didn’t just want someone to talk to; she needed someone to talk to.  For years, Bette had bottled in her emotions.  She kept them concealed for so long that they yearned for an escape.  Today would be the day, she would open herself up and pour out everything she wanted to share about Tina.

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    1. Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D

      Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P

      Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.

      What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…

      Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?

      Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D

    2. Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!

    11. umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.

    12. K,
      loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?

      please post soon. love this beginning.

    13. Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.

    15. Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon

    17. sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.

      nzgrl interesting idea.

    18. HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU

    19. Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!

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