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Letting Go – chapter nine
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As Jamie was trimming Bette’s hair, Bette stole a glance at Jamie through the mirror, and she couldn’t help but think of Tina. Jamie and Tina both had similar physical features, but they were extreme opposites. Tina was just as attractive, but she appeared humble and innocent. Jamie on the other hand, showed poise, self-esteem, excitement, and adventure.
“So what’s going on Bette, who’s the hot mama?” Jamie asked, she could tell just by looking at Bette, she was different today, her smile was bright, and her eyes were shining.
“You ARE good, how did you know?” Bette couldn’t hide her surprise. Jamie was always giving love advice to her clients through astrology.
“Bette,” Jamie cocked her head to one side and looked into Bette’s eyes in the mirror. “For the last year and a half that I’ve known you, you’ve never once looked this happy, and terrified at the same time. I know something’s up!” Jamie stated the obvious. Then she jokingly asked “Who’s the unlucky girl?”
“Shut-up,” Bette jokingly snatched back.
“Okay, I’m sorry, but who is she?” Jamie asked.
“She’s a new intern,” Bette replied.
“Ooh, young hot intern, ay?” Jamie wiggled her eyebrows as a grin escaped her mouth.
“Yeah, but she has a damn boyfriend.”
“So?” Jamie asked giving a “What’s your point?” expression.
“SO, she has a boyfriend.”
“How’s their relationship going? Have you talked to her, does she love him, can she see a future with him?”
“Who knows, they seem like they would be a happy couple.” Bette’s tone quickly changed, it was now full with defeat.
“That’s great, but are they? Look, why don’t you talk to her about her relationship? You never know unless you try! Besides, you’re one HOT tamale, and when I’m done, she won’t be able to keep her hands off you!” Jamie was hoping to encourage Bette to make a move.
“Right, so she’s supposed to just dump her boyfriend and run into my arms?” Bette said sarcastically.
“Yeah, pretty much!” Jamie’s tone was like a “How else is it supposed to be?” stating the obvious.
“Alright, tell me what you can about her using your ‘astrology magic.’” Bette said as she raised her hands in the air and made quotes with her index and middle fingers.
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Hey, I was about to ask you how’re u doing with your chap9. But surprise surprise, I log on and found your Chappy 9… Yippee… :D
Oh girl, your story is not going downhill, it’s still approaching it’s peak :) You’re doing so great, stop worrying about that anymore, focus more on your next chapter :P
Haha, again, you’ll still be doing great or much more better without my ‘help’ :P Hahaha, how can I not laugh at those dialogues, just picture the drawing that Tina was working on that made Alice quoted that way really cracks me up, and still do :D Hahahaha, hey, I really do find it romantic… super romantic of what Tina thought to Bette :) C’mon, appreciate your own writing a bit.
What what? Hahaha… you’re not trying to make Bette let go won’t u? Noooooo…
Hahaha, bad bad Bette, thinking of those… thoughts… but who can help themselves with a goddess in front of them?
Ok, now bring on the lunch and the clubbing night. :D
Oh fuck this is drama and what is Bette gonna do about this news, is she still go out with Tina for luch for tomorrow. Oh is Tina is Jamie’s sister, if its right that is a good twist. Ok post soon please, thanks!
hey smile! iam completely hooked to ur story.. please continue!
I think the story is great you should keep it going!!!!!
Tina must say no. Eric can cry back to Kelly. Please post soon because we need more. ; )
oh no!!
Hi Smile I want you to continue the story… I like it very much… Just have Tina to say no….Great chapter post soon
continuing to enjoy your story… you’re doing great!
Hey this is Amazing Please continue I Love it post soon Thanks.
I’m thinking Tina is Jamie’s sister.
umm… sure… right… you don’t know what you were writing. So, Tina and Eric are doing the enggagement thingy huh. Hmm… the tug and war game is sure getting more intriguing.
K,
loved this chapter. oh the possibilities!!! I can’t wait to see if Tina breaks up with Eric and goes out to the club with the girls. so is Kelly and Eric going to end up together? hmmmm. oh yeah I love Jamie, she seems fun. with her and Alice talking some sense into Bette, she should be able to deal. but who does Tina have to talk to?
please post soon. love this beginning.
Whoa,is Jamie, Tina’s sister? That would be so funny, how they are connected in different ways. Wow, proposal?! Poor Eric, is going to be so disappointed. But, then Kelly would be happy to make him feel better, I’m sure. Hope Bette doesn’t just give up and let Tina slip away.
OK….somehow Bette has to get to T’s apartment tonight and tell her how she feels…and then the ball is in T’s court..
Thanks for the update smile…and you do have to continue this amazing story here….we want more girl…..and regarding my own story..well the next chapter is comming along nicely and will be up in the beginning of next week……do post soon
Smile, please keep posting; you’re doing great.
nzgrl, you just may be on to something; I didnt put the 2 together until your comment.
sile why wouldnt you continue this story. its great the storyline is great. if you know where your going lead and well follow. someone needs to take charge here. will it be bette, tina , alice. clubbing sounds great for them just to chill.
nzgrl interesting idea.
HEY SMILE’S PLEASE CONTINUE THIS STORY..YOUR DOING AN EXCELLENT JOB..I like Jamie she seems cool..OH and Sag’s aren’t that Bad I happen to be one..and traditionally,Sagitarrians are the hunters of the zodiac.In love,as the other areas of their lives,the challenge of the chase is all-engrossing,and may even be more exciting than the capture.PLEASE POST SOON…THANK YOU
Oh Dear Heart, I sincerely do think you need to continue with this story. Besides, the locket, I suspect, is going to play an important role in the B&T relationship. Do not give up….this story is definately going somewhere. Five Twinklers!
Great story….please continue with your excellent writing as long it´s a happy B&T story :o))