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Letting Go – chapter ten
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“Nothing, I’ve just been stressed. That’s all.”
“About what? Finals are over now, and you said you’d be better, but you’re not.”
“Look Eric, I’m just stressed okay? I have so much going on right now, and I…I just…it’s overwhelming okay? I’m sorry, it’ll get better, I promise.” There Tina went again, making empty promises she knew she couldn’t keep or fulfill.
“Yeah, but…” Eric was cut off by Tina.
“Eric, it’s getting late, and I know you’ve got a busy day tomorrow. Get some sleep okay? Have a goodnight, and I’ll talk to you later.” Tina tried to end the phone call as soon as possible.
Eric had nothing more to say, he knew Tina was stubborn, and arguing with her would only make her more upset. He always gave in to Tina, “Okay, I love you, call me tomorrow okay?”
“I love you too, goodnight.” Just like that, Tina hung up her phone without saying another word to Eric.
Tina turned her body to her side bending her arms and resting on her elbow. Everything was uncomfortable, and she couldn’t take this anymore. Tina pulled herself off of her bed and walked to her bedroom window.
Tina’s apartment building was right off campus, and she could see the city lights shining down onto the street while the cars sped by, and the few students walking. Tina couldn’t take it anymore, the heat was spreading rapidly throughout her entire body, and she pulled up her window to let the cold breeze hit her. She prayed hoping somehow that the winter night’s wind would drift her thoughts elsewhere, but it wouldn’t, it refused to. Tina would have to face her problems all on her own.
‘AHHHHHHHHHHHHH!’ Tina let out an inner scream hoping for relief. She closed her eyes and let out the breath that she’d been holding in since she started peeking out the window. Tina raised both her hands and put them behind her neck searching for the clasp on her necklace. Once finding it, she unclasped her necklace as fast as she could. Tina slid her left hand back down and snaked her right hand to grab the key that was hanging in front of her neck. Tina didn’t want that key, and without even caring to take a final look, she grabbed the necklace into her right palm and with all her strength, threw it out her window.
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I totally love this story! I am glad your not making this easy is that eric I hope so!
You did it you , You actually stoppped the chapter, You are tease. can’t believe this Love this lets keep it happy please… Thanks
Awesome story….such a great spin to the B&T beginning…..I want more the story is great!!!!!!
WHAT!! Please not Eric, puleeez!!!!!
Uh oh, it’s Eric. Great chapter…keep up the great work!!
OMG don’t stop there!!! Are you trying to kill us?? I love this story it just keeps getting better. So sweet, this is the right kind of drama. I love it. Keep up the good work.
Just caught back up with the last few chapters. Damn girl. There just too cute. All the internal turmoil, as well as external. STill gotta love Alice, she just cracks me up. BUt you left us hanging again, hello, what did she see or whom? Come on post, post.
Yes Smile I am very very sure that I want you to continue the story… You are doing great….believe it.. I am not kidding you.. Great chapter
and WHAT??? Urgh… you’re getting better at the cliffhangers! I hate you. LOL, jk. oKAY… CAN’t WAIITT! Yeah, you sure don’t know what you’re writing and I like it better that way (mischievous grin).
Ok, I’m totally lov’n this story, but pls these chapters although 2 are WAY too short, your killing me here!! Pls PLs more were just getting to some good stuff!!!! Tks
Ohhhhh sh*t! You DID NOT stop this chapter right there!! LOL Damn, this is getting better and better! I can’t stand the suspense. Put me outta my misery and post again soon. Please. =) BTW, I like this chapter!
stop selling yourself short girl. your doing a great job. but you did not just end the chappy that way did you. that was sooo uncalled for. you best be posting soon. and if its eric, i swear somones not gonna be happy. i love this story and your doing a great job with the pace and writing. so do it again, now, or asap. thanks.
if Bette and Tina looked up and saw Eric then perhaps Eric needs to head out to McDonalds ALONE. I really do enjoy your story… For some reason I just happen to think that it is very sweet. Once again, I really relate to the initial perfume encounter lol
Oh come on! You are gonna stop writing now? Right here? Such a tease!
Smile….you’re getting better and better every day with this cliff hanging shyt…..WTG girl!! WTG!!!
Now post another chapter before I to get someone shoot me and put me out my misery……
Really diggin’ this story.
arrrrrrrgghh!!! quel suspense!! ce n’est pas humain de nous laisser comme cela… Merci pour ton histoire, j’attends la suite avec impatience
Oh damn you can’t leave us like this, are you try to kill us here. Please post soon, thanks!
Thanks for the two chapters that I got to read this morning. First of all, I need to convince you that you absolutely must continue writing. This is a wonderful story and you are doing excellent with it. Second, I am so glad Tina got rid of the necklace….and that Alice continues to help these two. Now I cannot wait for your next post and for these two to start revealing their feelings to each other. Kiitos paljon!
i love the story and please post soon coz im dying to know the next story and hopefully it’s not eric then
Awww c’mon now, you can’t just leave us hangin’ like that. What’s up with that?!!! They’re supposed to go to lunch. They haven’t even made it out to the car?!!! Can you help a sista’ out here? PLEASE!!!??!!
You are very cheeky leaving us hanging like that!!! I just got to say that i am loving your story and please post soon!!!
How can your heart beat so strongly for someone you don’t even know, and how can it hurt so much for someone you don’t want to love?’
Wow… wow… wow… I was really really… speechless when I first read that line… and still am overwhelmed by that line…
The story is great, all the actions and details are bringing us to the edge of our chair :)
Well, Tina better don’t let go, she’ll have to be the one to catch and hold onto Bette if Bette’s gonna give up :P
Zabo, you take the words right out of my mouth.
I don’t have to count numbers to smile…just keep on writing!
so do all of the authors get together to decide the best ways to write cliffhangers that leave us readers yelling at the screen?!!! LOL
I forgive you smile, just please tell us who is standing there. I bet it’s Eric……hmmm. anyway you got me until the end.
hmmm.. this is getting interesting! how will eric react to the missing necklace? oh dont tell me he’s gonna get down on his knee in front of bette! nice work.. hope u post soon!
I’m sooooooo frustrated with all these cliffies on this site! I think need to take a break and come back in a month or so and then just catch up on everything…*hmph* YEAH, RIGHT! Like THAT is ever gonna happen! I’ve got a monkey on my back–Hell, I’ve got a shit-load of monkeys hangin’ all over my ass and one of them is “smile12345”! Toss me a frickin’ bone, will ya?…and get on with it!!!!Please post soon! (Oh yeah, the answer to your question about why I started to read your story….hmmmm…..I’m a sucker for B & T beginnings, AND I liked your ‘smile’;)!
Damn smile..you didn´t just stop here…you are a tease keeping us on the edge of our seat…and you´re not seriously thinking about cutting this story..you are doing so great..so keep going because we want more lots more. post soon
HEY SMILES, YES, I am still loving your story and from all your comments I think everybody else does too..EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!RIGHT???? ANYWAY, there is no way I would be offended about what you said about sag’s we all know how we are.HEHEHEHR.KEEP UP THE FABULOUS STORY O.K. THANKS