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    Letting Go – chapter ten

    Story written on August 22, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56188
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    What does Alice tell Tina, and what does Bette and Tina see?

     

    Before hearing what Alice said, Tina’s heart pumped with nerves, it was heavy and working on overload.  Now, her heart pumped at an increased rate, but the nervousness quickly disappeared, it was now beating and shouting “she likes me too,” but no matter how fast it was beating, it wasn’t going fast enough, her heart wanted to shout it to the world.  From the heart, it flew down to her stomach full of butterflies knocking into one another unable to settle down.  Finally, her legs went weak, Tina no longer felt like she could stand, they involuntarily walked towards Alice.

     

    “She likes me?” Tina finally asked hoping this wasn’t a dream.

     

    “Uhh…yeah, how the ***** could you not tell?” Alice‘s expression showed a “can’t you see?” type of look.

     

    “No…I…” Tina didn’t know what else to say, she just wanted to find Bette.

     

    Alice saw Tina’s urgency, “Look, why don’t you just go meet her right now?”  Alice went behind Tina’s back and held onto Tina’s shoulders pushing her guiding her to the door.

     

    Tina was now at Bette’s classroom.  She took a deep breath and reached for the doorknob.  Just when she was about to push turn it and push, Bette pulled it open.  They were now face to face again, and all Tina could do was smile as she met Bette’s defeated orbs.

     

    “Hi…” Bette managed to whisper something; Tina’s stare was so intense Bette wasn’t sure how to respond verbally.

     

    Alice peeked out from her classroom watching the two, and she couldn’t believe what she saw.  How long were they going to stand there and stare at one another for at the door?  She shook her head in disappointment and walked towards Bette’s classroom. These two dumbasses,’ Alice muttered as she walked.

     

    She grabbed onto both their hands and pulled them into the hallway, and once they were out in the hallway, Alice gave both a gentle shove on their backs and said “Now go get some lunch or do you want me to feed you too?”

     

    While they were walking to the parking lot, they couldn’t help but steal glances at each other.  Bette said she wouldn’t interfere between Tina and Eric’s relationship, but every promise she made herself seemed to mean nothing when she actually came into contact with her.

     

    “Umm…where do you want to eat?” Bette finally spoke up first breaking the silence.

     

    “Anywhere, I don’t know this county too well so you can pick.”

     

    “Okay, well, there’s this cute little restaurant just a five minute drive, and it’s…”

     

    Bette’s words were cut off when she noticed Tina had changed her focus to another direction.  Bette looked up and….

     

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    6. OMG don’t stop there!!! Are you trying to kill us?? I love this story it just keeps getting better. So sweet, this is the right kind of drama. I love it. Keep up the good work.

    7. Just caught back up with the last few chapters. Damn girl. There just too cute. All the internal turmoil, as well as external. STill gotta love Alice, she just cracks me up. BUt you left us hanging again, hello, what did she see or whom? Come on post, post.

    9. and WHAT??? Urgh… you’re getting better at the cliffhangers! I hate you. LOL, jk. oKAY… CAN’t WAIITT! Yeah, you sure don’t know what you’re writing and I like it better that way (mischievous grin).

    10. Ok, I’m totally lov’n this story, but pls these chapters although 2 are WAY too short, your killing me here!! Pls PLs more were just getting to some good stuff!!!! Tks

    11. Ohhhhh sh*t! You DID NOT stop this chapter right there!! LOL Damn, this is getting better and better! I can’t stand the suspense. Put me outta my misery and post again soon. Please. =) BTW, I like this chapter!

    12. stop selling yourself short girl. your doing a great job. but you did not just end the chappy that way did you. that was sooo uncalled for. you best be posting soon. and if its eric, i swear somones not gonna be happy. i love this story and your doing a great job with the pace and writing. so do it again, now, or asap. thanks.

    13. if Bette and Tina looked up and saw Eric then perhaps Eric needs to head out to McDonalds ALONE. I really do enjoy your story… For some reason I just happen to think that it is very sweet. Once again, I really relate to the initial perfume encounter lol

    15. Smile….you’re getting better and better every day with this cliff hanging shyt…..WTG girl!! WTG!!!

      Now post another chapter before I to get someone shoot me and put me out my misery……

      Really diggin’ this story.

    16. arrrrrrrgghh!!! quel suspense!! ce n’est pas humain de nous laisser comme cela… Merci pour ton histoire, j’attends la suite avec impatience

    18. Thanks for the two chapters that I got to read this morning. First of all, I need to convince you that you absolutely must continue writing. This is a wonderful story and you are doing excellent with it. Second, I am so glad Tina got rid of the necklace….and that Alice continues to help these two. Now I cannot wait for your next post and for these two to start revealing their feelings to each other. Kiitos paljon!

    20. Awww c’mon now, you can’t just leave us hangin’ like that. What’s up with that?!!! They’re supposed to go to lunch. They haven’t even made it out to the car?!!! Can you help a sista’ out here? PLEASE!!!??!!

    22. How can your heart beat so strongly for someone you don’t even know, and how can it hurt so much for someone you don’t want to love?’

      Wow… wow… wow… I was really really… speechless when I first read that line… and still am overwhelmed by that line…
      The story is great, all the actions and details are bringing us to the edge of our chair :)
      Well, Tina better don’t let go, she’ll have to be the one to catch and hold onto Bette if Bette’s gonna give up :P

    24. so do all of the authors get together to decide the best ways to write cliffhangers that leave us readers yelling at the screen?!!! LOL
      I forgive you smile, just please tell us who is standing there. I bet it’s Eric……hmmm. anyway you got me until the end.

    25. hmmm.. this is getting interesting! how will eric react to the missing necklace? oh dont tell me he’s gonna get down on his knee in front of bette! nice work.. hope u post soon!

    26. I’m sooooooo frustrated with all these cliffies on this site! I think need to take a break and come back in a month or so and then just catch up on everything…*hmph* YEAH, RIGHT! Like THAT is ever gonna happen! I’ve got a monkey on my back–Hell, I’ve got a shit-load of monkeys hangin’ all over my ass and one of them is “smile12345”! Toss me a frickin’ bone, will ya?…and get on with it!!!!Please post soon! (Oh yeah, the answer to your question about why I started to read your story….hmmmm…..I’m a sucker for B & T beginnings, AND I liked your ‘smile’;)!

    27. Damn smile..you didn´t just stop here…you are a tease keeping us on the edge of our seat…and you´re not seriously thinking about cutting this story..you are doing so great..so keep going because we want more lots more. post soon

    28. HEY SMILES, YES, I am still loving your story and from all your comments I think everybody else does too..EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!RIGHT???? ANYWAY, there is no way I would be offended about what you said about sag’s we all know how we are.HEHEHEHR.KEEP UP THE FABULOUS STORY O.K. THANKS

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