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    Letting Go – chapter ten

    Story written on August 22, 2005 by smile12345.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=56188
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    What does Alice tell Tina, and what does Bette and Tina see?

     

    As the necklace flew in the air, Tina closed her eyes and whispered, “I’m sorry Eric, but I’m in love with someone else.”

     

    This was it, Tina was in love with Bette.  That feeling of love that was once so unfamiliar to her became so clear within a matter of seconds.  She took the first step by admitting she was in love with Bette Porter.  What would the second step be?  Everything would have to wait until tomorrow.

     

    Tuesday arrived faster than Bette and Tina had imagined.  The feelings they had about their “lunch date” were quite mixed.  Both were eager and just couldn’t wait, for once, they actually wanted that bell to ring.  At the same time, they were terrified; their nerves crept up behind them and would get the best of them. 

     

    As that fourth period bell rang, Alice watched Tina pacing around the classroom.  Alice‘s head didn’t move, but her eyes followed every step Tina made.

     

    ‘Good lord, the students must think she’s crazy…’ Alice thought lightly shaking her head in disapproval.

     

    After the last student exited, Alice decided it was time for her “pep talk” and she’d better make it quick before Bette came looking for Tina.

     

    “Tina, I know I haven’t known you for very long, but…I know there’s something special about you, and just so you can stop wondering…”  Alice paused and began to think before she spoke this time.

     

    ‘Am I crossing the line? I don’t want to interfere between her and Bette,’

     

    ‘Stop wondering, stop wondering about what? Why did she stop talking?’

     

    Oh *****, if she didn’t say anything, who would?  God knows how long it would take the two to get together, it’s not like she would be able to follow them around 24/7.  She knew this would be what Tina wanted to hear.

     

    Tina held her breath as she waited for Alice to finish her sentence.

     

    Alice took a deep breath, “Bette is interested you, she likes you, she likes you A LOT!”

     

    ‘She likes ME? Bette likes me?  What does that mean, “she likes me”‘

     

    Tina stood there in shock, the words were heard, but they processed differently through out Tina’s body and each part had a different response.  When Alice first said those words, it traveled into Tina’s brain, and it was soon trying to differentiate the “like” between friends or lovers.  Once her brain made a conclusion that the “like” meant more than friendship; Tina became lightheaded, she could see the stars making circles around her.  Alice‘s words traveled downwards and began to process itself all over again.  The second stop were Tina’s eyes, they went from the initial shocked, disbelief reaction, to a shining glow that exerted confidence and determination.  Next was to Tina’s lips.  It went from jaw dropping surprise to a smile that came from the heart; it was from ear to ear revealing her contentment and joy from Alice‘s statement.

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    6. OMG don’t stop there!!! Are you trying to kill us?? I love this story it just keeps getting better. So sweet, this is the right kind of drama. I love it. Keep up the good work.

    7. Just caught back up with the last few chapters. Damn girl. There just too cute. All the internal turmoil, as well as external. STill gotta love Alice, she just cracks me up. BUt you left us hanging again, hello, what did she see or whom? Come on post, post.

    9. and WHAT??? Urgh… you’re getting better at the cliffhangers! I hate you. LOL, jk. oKAY… CAN’t WAIITT! Yeah, you sure don’t know what you’re writing and I like it better that way (mischievous grin).

    10. Ok, I’m totally lov’n this story, but pls these chapters although 2 are WAY too short, your killing me here!! Pls PLs more were just getting to some good stuff!!!! Tks

    11. Ohhhhh sh*t! You DID NOT stop this chapter right there!! LOL Damn, this is getting better and better! I can’t stand the suspense. Put me outta my misery and post again soon. Please. =) BTW, I like this chapter!

    12. stop selling yourself short girl. your doing a great job. but you did not just end the chappy that way did you. that was sooo uncalled for. you best be posting soon. and if its eric, i swear somones not gonna be happy. i love this story and your doing a great job with the pace and writing. so do it again, now, or asap. thanks.

    13. if Bette and Tina looked up and saw Eric then perhaps Eric needs to head out to McDonalds ALONE. I really do enjoy your story… For some reason I just happen to think that it is very sweet. Once again, I really relate to the initial perfume encounter lol

    15. Smile….you’re getting better and better every day with this cliff hanging shyt…..WTG girl!! WTG!!!

      Now post another chapter before I to get someone shoot me and put me out my misery……

      Really diggin’ this story.

    16. arrrrrrrgghh!!! quel suspense!! ce n’est pas humain de nous laisser comme cela… Merci pour ton histoire, j’attends la suite avec impatience

    18. Thanks for the two chapters that I got to read this morning. First of all, I need to convince you that you absolutely must continue writing. This is a wonderful story and you are doing excellent with it. Second, I am so glad Tina got rid of the necklace….and that Alice continues to help these two. Now I cannot wait for your next post and for these two to start revealing their feelings to each other. Kiitos paljon!

    20. Awww c’mon now, you can’t just leave us hangin’ like that. What’s up with that?!!! They’re supposed to go to lunch. They haven’t even made it out to the car?!!! Can you help a sista’ out here? PLEASE!!!??!!

    22. How can your heart beat so strongly for someone you don’t even know, and how can it hurt so much for someone you don’t want to love?’

      Wow… wow… wow… I was really really… speechless when I first read that line… and still am overwhelmed by that line…
      The story is great, all the actions and details are bringing us to the edge of our chair :)
      Well, Tina better don’t let go, she’ll have to be the one to catch and hold onto Bette if Bette’s gonna give up :P

    24. so do all of the authors get together to decide the best ways to write cliffhangers that leave us readers yelling at the screen?!!! LOL
      I forgive you smile, just please tell us who is standing there. I bet it’s Eric……hmmm. anyway you got me until the end.

    25. hmmm.. this is getting interesting! how will eric react to the missing necklace? oh dont tell me he’s gonna get down on his knee in front of bette! nice work.. hope u post soon!

    26. I’m sooooooo frustrated with all these cliffies on this site! I think need to take a break and come back in a month or so and then just catch up on everything…*hmph* YEAH, RIGHT! Like THAT is ever gonna happen! I’ve got a monkey on my back–Hell, I’ve got a shit-load of monkeys hangin’ all over my ass and one of them is “smile12345”! Toss me a frickin’ bone, will ya?…and get on with it!!!!Please post soon! (Oh yeah, the answer to your question about why I started to read your story….hmmmm…..I’m a sucker for B & T beginnings, AND I liked your ‘smile’;)!

    27. Damn smile..you didn´t just stop here…you are a tease keeping us on the edge of our seat…and you´re not seriously thinking about cutting this story..you are doing so great..so keep going because we want more lots more. post soon

    28. HEY SMILES, YES, I am still loving your story and from all your comments I think everybody else does too..EXCEPT FOR THE CLIFFHANGERS!!!RIGHT???? ANYWAY, there is no way I would be offended about what you said about sag’s we all know how we are.HEHEHEHR.KEEP UP THE FABULOUS STORY O.K. THANKS

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