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    Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn

    Story written on November 26, 2005 by Janet Marie.
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    Author Notes:

    Alice makes a confession – Jenny and Marina talk about Shane and see something disturbing – Tina and Cassandra talk and perhaps more – Bette makes a mistake and Candace calls her on it – Quin visits someone close to her

                “That was dumb, very dumb I
    was just so excited by what I saw, what you made me see….”  Bette admitted and Candace pulled her close, kissing her gently as
    her cell phone rang in her pocket.

                “We have to get that card, if
    it’s not already gone.”  Candace     said, pulling her cell phone open as she
    slipped her shoes into her feet.      Bette     did the same, digging into her pockets
    for her keys.

                “No!  Yes, I’ll be there, get the water main shut
    off!”  Candace     said, snapping her phone shut and
    cursing in Spanish, she gave     Bette     an apologetic look.

                “Bette, I have to go to the Center, you go get
    that card?”      Candace     asked and Bette nodded, walking with Candace to the vehicles.  Bette waved her goodbye and as she was getting into the
    car, she saw     Marina    , on Jenny‘s porch, watching her.  Bette waved, but Marina didn’t say or do anything, she just
    opened the screen door and walked back into the house, without a word.

    ~*~*~*~*~*

                Quin walked away from the
    hospital biting her lip as her always serious face was cast in an unusual
    darker shadow.  Her jaw was set and she
    walked up to the limo waiting for her, Raul     rolled up the window and she closed the
    door.  She settled into the leather seat,
    putting her head back on the cool material.

                “Home?”  He asked and Quin didn’t answer, instead she
    was studying her hands, the callus there from the playing and countless hours
    of mindless playing and practicing.  What
    for? Who for?  For herself?  Never, for whom then did she play with the
    soul of a madwoman, what touched her to play as she did.  Was she possessed by something beyond this
    world?  Questions that came to her in
    moments like this, in times of her vulnerability. 

                “What Raul?” 
    Quin asked in an uncharacteristic questioning tone.  He turned to her, and she put her seat belt
    on and he asked again.  His own tone very
    gentle and he grinned, his almost white hair glinting in the sun.

                “Do you want me to drop you
    off at your apartment?”  He asked and she
    thought for a long moment, playing with a pink strand of hair and she shook her
    head no.  She was pink today, pink, and
    orange, two colors her mother hated with more venom than a rattlesnake.

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    1. After all this time can’t understand why Bette would take Candace to hers and Tina home, that take guts, also in their bed. If she feels so strong for Candace.let her walk off and tell Tina goodbye. She is really pushing Tina into some one elses arms. thanks

    2. I was so touched with Alice’s confession. And she’s such a good friend to Shane, I love them both so much! And someone should just go drown Candace in the pool, maybe Marina can do that haha! The character Quin is also very interesting, she seems to so strong and so fragile at the same time. Really excellent writing here. And I’ll be sure to check out some of your collaborating work too. Need I say it…update soon ;)

    4. sweetie WTF do you mean your taken??? LMAO!!! Of course I’m a huge admirer. your stories are fucking brilliant. I truly enjoy you and wind. OH and the best part is there is no B&T hahahaha love that!!!

    5. I’m sorry, but I need to vent…I really want to choke the Bette in this story. She takes self-centeredness to new lows. She’s cheating, remorselessly, and then adding insult to injury by bringing Candace into their home? Freak!Considering how nonchalant she is being about her affair, I’m also surprised the gang has not found her in a comprimising position yet.*Sigh*I guess Tina is going to be checking into Heartbreak Hotel very soon. Let’s hope Ms. Grey is there to, er, ‘comfort’ her.

    6. yes.the whole in b/t’s house for hells sake. thats really pushing it for me also. now that i know you love angst and drama and pain i know what to look for. wont set myself up to think there will be somekind of happiness. my kind of happiness. so bring it. love your writing. its very good. thanks.

    7. I hate Bette right now!!! I can’t stand that she take Candance to their home and their bed. It’s grose!!It makes me feel sick. I hope Bette feels a lot of pain really soon!! I want see her breakdown and depressed. I hope Tina does not cheat her before kwonwing about Bette and Candace affair!!! Please deserve to kwonw what happens behind her back! Keep going!! And post again soon!

    8. “Did Tina dye her hair dark?” I can’t believe the audacity of Bette so I hope Tina finds comfort (or whatever they call it these days) from Cass. As for Shane, I hope she be back to *ucking & *ucking soon. Please post soon.

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