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Life: Altered 03.10 ~*~ Ebony Dawn
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“No.” She said, and he waited for instructions and
she finally said to
“I want to go see
She said, and he nodded, driving and she sat in the back seat, thinking
of what she’d just heard and admonished herself for almost caring.
Almost.
Quin wasn’t an unfeeling woman;
if anything, she felt things much too keenly for someone who was a mere 25
years of age. She was just very good at
keeping everything bottled up inside and not showing anyone how she felt. In words or outwardly, she was never affectionate;
she hardly ever touched anyone, unless she had too. Or the passion built up to the point of
exploding like a volcano, then she’d take it out on a hot one night stand and
go back to being cold. She watched as
the city disappeared and they drove up their quiet destination.
“I always thought that
and Quin let a bit of a smile play on the edge of her lips. She nodded, stepping out into the sunlight,
blinking and shielding her eyes from the blazing sun. She turned to ask
them to her, as if knowing what she’d wanted.
“Thank you
She said and he nodded, as she slipped on the pair of lightly tinted
sunglasses, pink to match her hair she saw.
“I’ll be here when you are
ready.” He said and she nodded, walking
down the beaten path, and finding the spot with ease. Quin knew the spot well; she’d sat there for
hours talking and being herself. She was
always struck with the fragility of life when she was here, glistening granite
and green grass, the wispy trees that sang their own songs of woe and
heartache.
“Hi
you miss me?” She asked and sat down in
the manicured grass, not expecting an answer.
She never got one, not today, not a month ago, not 7 years before. However, she didn’t need a verbal answer; all
she needed was to speak.
“Mother is being typical
mother. She’s off on a buying spree
again she got back yesterday. I haven’t
had a chance to see what trinkets she got this time, but I’m sure they are
amazing, as always.” Quin spoke, her
voice not the bland tone as she usually spoke; instead, it was filled with
playfulness and joy.
“I wrote this new song, named
it after the band, actually after the band you always wanted to start. I remember you scribbling that name on notebooks,
and playing that guitar that your father bought you, endless hours. How I had mother buy me ear plugs because I
simply couldn’t stand it anymore. I
should have brought my guitar, but I guess I can sing it for you, can’t I?” She said, licking her lips and clearing her
mind, hearing the music building in her soul.
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After all this time can’t understand why Bette would take Candace to hers and Tina home, that take guts, also in their bed. If she feels so strong for Candace.let her walk off and tell Tina goodbye. She is really pushing Tina into some one elses arms. thanks
I was so touched with Alice’s confession. And she’s such a good friend to Shane, I love them both so much! And someone should just go drown Candace in the pool, maybe Marina can do that haha! The character Quin is also very interesting, she seems to so strong and so fragile at the same time. Really excellent writing here. And I’ll be sure to check out some of your collaborating work too. Need I say it…update soon ;)
Man its good to read this story again..although Im wondering where the girls next door went??..anyway I love it keep it up
sweetie WTF do you mean your taken??? LMAO!!! Of course I’m a huge admirer. your stories are fucking brilliant. I truly enjoy you and wind. OH and the best part is there is no B&T hahahaha love that!!!
I’m sorry, but I need to vent…I really want to choke the Bette in this story. She takes self-centeredness to new lows. She’s cheating, remorselessly, and then adding insult to injury by bringing Candace into their home? Freak!Considering how nonchalant she is being about her affair, I’m also surprised the gang has not found her in a comprimising position yet.*Sigh*I guess Tina is going to be checking into Heartbreak Hotel very soon. Let’s hope Ms. Grey is there to, er, ‘comfort’ her.
yes.the whole in b/t’s house for hells sake. thats really pushing it for me also. now that i know you love angst and drama and pain i know what to look for. wont set myself up to think there will be somekind of happiness. my kind of happiness. so bring it. love your writing. its very good. thanks.
I hate Bette right now!!! I can’t stand that she take Candance to their home and their bed. It’s grose!!It makes me feel sick. I hope Bette feels a lot of pain really soon!! I want see her breakdown and depressed. I hope Tina does not cheat her before kwonwing about Bette and Candace affair!!! Please deserve to kwonw what happens behind her back! Keep going!! And post again soon!
“Did Tina dye her hair dark?” I can’t believe the audacity of Bette so I hope Tina finds comfort (or whatever they call it these days) from Cass. As for Shane, I hope she be back to *ucking & *ucking soon. Please post soon.