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    Lightning Crashes – 5

    Story written on February 24, 2007 by Kace.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64683
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    Lara has a nightmare, enraging her; Bette and Shane talk; Carmen DJ’s while Papi inquires more about Shane. Future character introductions are teased.

    At the Planet, Carmen is getting back into her groove again as she DJ’s for the night crowd.  In the distance and in spite of the dimmed setting, she can still see Papi in the crowd, working her way through the crowd towards her at the DJ booth.  Carmen has a bad feeling about what, or rather whom Papi wants to talk about when Carmen ends her set.

    On the couch, Lara twists and turns in the near empty house.  She can feel herself being sucked in to those moments she cannot escape.

    Dana, lying in her bed.  She’s sick.  She has cancer.  She’s dying and she knows it.  The realization of this angers her.  Nothing can help.  No one can help.  She’s going to die.  Yet, there she is.  There’s Lara, doing her best to keep Dana’s spirits up.  And it’s not helping.  The words sting through Lara’s body as if she were being impaled by each syllable of every word from Dana’s mouth.

    "Leave!!!  Just go!"

    Lara: …Dannaaa…

    No matter how many times she tries, she can never succeed in staying put.  The more Lara persists in being there, the worse it gets for her as the moment begins to mesh with another.

    It’s a hotel suite in Canada.  Lara has a lot on her mind, as does Alice.  They both struggle with what to do.  And then it hits her.

    "You know what, Lara?  I made a promise to stop medicating my pain with sex.  But it’s not the sex…it’s the fact that it’s with you."

    "Why?"

    "It’s like fucking incest, Lara.  Jesus, it’s just…it’s just wrong."

    The argument continues and it never ends the way Lara wants.

    Lara: Al….ice…

    Lara’s body shakes in bed as the Earth spins around her, dizzying her.

    "You should just go to San Francisco."

    "Not without you…"

    "Goddammit, just go!"

    Lara’s eyes open as she fights back the tears and grits her teeth in both anger and anguish.

    "Leave!!!  Just go!"

    "Goddammit, just go!"

    "Leave!!!  Just go!"

    "Goddammit, just go!"

    "Leave!!!  Just go!"

    "Goddammit, just go!"

    "Leave!!!  Just go!"

    "Goddammit, just go!"

    Lara wants to scream, but she can’t.  Dana and Alice’s voices haunt her as they grow louder inside her head.

    "JUST GO!"

    "JUST GO!"

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    1. I could totally see Shay saying Lara’s beating up the couch as if he was saying, “I’m gonna go take a shower.” He’s so quiet. lol And lol@Bepi NOOOOOOOOOOOO that would be all kinds of wrong. I figured Bette and Lara would get together. Bette would never have to worry about going hungry. Glad that the stomach bug is gone. PPS!

    3. “it’s not the sex, it’s that it’s with you…” OUCH! No wonder our girl Lara is anguished aka, what-we-never-got-to-see-on-the-show. Thanks for keeping up her development, and hmm, I like the thought of her buidling something with Bette, if that is fitting with the larger scheme of things. OK, so now I REALLY miss her not being on the show. Thank goodness for your fanfic. Hope you are feeling better (bad stomach virus, BAD!) and PPS!

    5. LOL Bepi! Brilliant. I’m really glad to see you developing Lara; I always thought there was more there. Not sure how much I see Bette and Lara… Though, true, Bette would actually eat then… I don’t know. I’m still adjusting to this new group dynamic, but I like it a lot and think you’re doing a really fantastic job with something that SO diverges from the usual groups/pairings. Fabulous. PPS

    6. I’m with Probie on the couples! Hell yeah bring it on. Kace you’re doing a bang up job. Laura should start talking with some of the other girls. Good thing Carmen and Shane can be friends. I like Papi in this. Good job.

    7. Geez! Lara’s really going through it. Papi obviously wants her friend on the phone (Tasha?) to hook up w/ someone but I wasn’t thinking Carmen, were you? I just think they are too much alike, & from the same area but you’re the writer if anyone can spin that, you can. Does Papi want Lara or Carmen? PPS.

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