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    Lightning Crashes – 5

    Story written on February 24, 2007 by Kace.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=64683
    Author Notes:

    Lara has a nightmare, enraging her; Bette and Shane talk; Carmen DJ’s while Papi inquires more about Shane. Future character introductions are teased.

    "JUST GO!"

    "JUST GO!"

    Lara: Stop!!!

    Her only defense is to punch away at the head of the couch, repeatedly screaming, "Stop!!!" until her voice dries up and the tears begin to stream out.

    Next door, all is peaceful at Bette’s.

    Shane: Think you’ll be able to come over tomorrow night?

    Bette: What’s tomorrow night?

    Shane: Eh, we’re just havin’ dinner.  Inviting a new friend over.  Well, a new friend of Shay’s anyway.

    Bette: It’s nice to know Shay’s making friends.

    Shane: Yeah, his Mom’s real cool.  So they’re comin’ over and we’re all gonna eat.  And Lara’ll be cooking so you know the meal’ll be good.

    Bette nods.

    Bette: A good home cooked meal?  That’s hard to pass up.

    A frantic knocking is heard on the door.  Bette and Shane look at each other.  Both rise from the couch to check who it is, with Shane looking through the window.

    Shane: It’s Shay.

    Bette opens the door.

    Shay: Miss Porter?

    Shane walks over to the door where Bette and Shay are.

    Shane: What’s wrong?

    Shay: It’s Lara.  She’s beating up the couch.

    Carmen’s set has ended for the evening.  One by one, she loads her boxes of records into her vehicle.  Tonight, she has help in the form of Papi.

    Papi: So Shane…the skinny white girl?  That’s the one I been hearin’ about all this time?

    Carmen: That’s the one.

    Papi: And you almost married her?

    Carmen: Almost.  And now we’re just roommates.  Great, isn’t it?

    Papi: Carmen, you don’t understand.  I pull honies in everywhere, man.  I got the look, I got the skills, I got the charm.  And I know I got more hookups than her.  But the thing that drives me up the fucking wall is girls who were with Shane YEARS ago still talk about it like it was this great experience and shit.  How come I don’t get that as much?

    Carmen: Because, Papi.  And don’t take this the wrong way, but…you’re great.  She’s beyond great.  At least when it comes to sex.

    Papi places her hands on her hips.

    Papi: She’s better than me at sex?

    Carmen: Papi, just drop it alright?  I really don’t wanna talk about it.

    Papi: Ohhhh….she broke your heart, right?

    Carmen places a box inside her vehicle and sighs.

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    1. I could totally see Shay saying Lara’s beating up the couch as if he was saying, “I’m gonna go take a shower.” He’s so quiet. lol And lol@Bepi NOOOOOOOOOOOO that would be all kinds of wrong. I figured Bette and Lara would get together. Bette would never have to worry about going hungry. Glad that the stomach bug is gone. PPS!

    3. “it’s not the sex, it’s that it’s with you…” OUCH! No wonder our girl Lara is anguished aka, what-we-never-got-to-see-on-the-show. Thanks for keeping up her development, and hmm, I like the thought of her buidling something with Bette, if that is fitting with the larger scheme of things. OK, so now I REALLY miss her not being on the show. Thank goodness for your fanfic. Hope you are feeling better (bad stomach virus, BAD!) and PPS!

    5. LOL Bepi! Brilliant. I’m really glad to see you developing Lara; I always thought there was more there. Not sure how much I see Bette and Lara… Though, true, Bette would actually eat then… I don’t know. I’m still adjusting to this new group dynamic, but I like it a lot and think you’re doing a really fantastic job with something that SO diverges from the usual groups/pairings. Fabulous. PPS

    6. I’m with Probie on the couples! Hell yeah bring it on. Kace you’re doing a bang up job. Laura should start talking with some of the other girls. Good thing Carmen and Shane can be friends. I like Papi in this. Good job.

    7. Geez! Lara’s really going through it. Papi obviously wants her friend on the phone (Tasha?) to hook up w/ someone but I wasn’t thinking Carmen, were you? I just think they are too much alike, & from the same area but you’re the writer if anyone can spin that, you can. Does Papi want Lara or Carmen? PPS.

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