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Lightning Crashes – 5
Carmen: Papi…
Papi: You know, that’s the difference. Me? I try to let the girls know up front, this ain’t a long ride. This is just for tonight and that’s it.
Carmen walks up to Papi.
Carmen: So does Shane. But people fall in love with her anyway, because she has that effect. I know. In the end, I broke my own heart. And I really don’t wanna talk about it right now.
Papi: Back in the day, man we used to talk about everything.
Carmen: Yeah…that was back then.
Carmen closes her eyes and clears her throat.
Carmen: I’m sorry. Look…if you’re back and you want us to be buds like we used to be a long time ago? I’m fine with that. But drop all this stuff with Shane…and please, don’t be trying to add my friends to your little list of hits.
Papi: Shit, you don’t mean friends. You just mean that chef girl.
Carmen: No, I especially mean, "that chef girl," and her name is Lara.
Carmen’s cellphone rings. She answers it.
Carmen: Hello?
Papi looks on.
Carmen: Okay, I’m coming right over. ………………… Yeah, I’m getting everything loaded in now. I’ll be there in a few.
Carmen hangs up.
Carmen: I gotta go. Can you help me get the rest of this stuff in?
Papi: Yeah, sure. I’m just sayin’ you need to get laid, girl.
Carmen rolls her eyes.
Bette and Shane hold vigil over Lara, who is still shaking as she sits on the floor, her back against the couch and her hands clutching a bottle of water. She drinks to keep herself from dehydrating.
Shane: She’s not gonna talk until Carmen gets here.
Bette: Why Carmen?
Shane: That’s who she talks to.
Bette: Lara? Lara, honey you can talk with either of us as well. Anytime you need to.
Lara drinks some of the water.
Shane: Must’ve been a pretty bad nightmare.
Bette: I know the feeling.
Carmen has sped off into the night, headed for home while Papi looks on. She pulls out her cellphone and punches in a number. She immediately gets the voicemail message.
Papi: ‘Ey, I know you’re sleepin’ right now so I just wanted to leave you a little message. I know you just got back and shit, but I gotta good feelin’. I’m hangin’ with an old friend of mine again and she’s awesome. So when we party again, I gotta introduce ya to her. I know, I know you don’t like hearing me say shit like that, but trust me on this one. I think this one’s the real deal.
The front door opens and Carmen enters. She sees Bette and Shane both holding Lara, who’s been fighting back tears the entire time. Carmen drops to her knees in front of Lara and places her hands on Lara’s knees.
Carmen: What happened?
Lara goes to speak, but instead can only discard the now empty bottle and reach out with her hands and legs, inviting her comfort. Carmen slides closer to her, with Bette and Shane still there and they embrace. Lara finally lets go and they’re all there for her.
"Keep the faith"
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I could totally see Shay saying Lara’s beating up the couch as if he was saying, “I’m gonna go take a shower.” He’s so quiet. lol And lol@Bepi NOOOOOOOOOOOO that would be all kinds of wrong. I figured Bette and Lara would get together. Bette would never have to worry about going hungry. Glad that the stomach bug is gone. PPS!
So Tasha and Carmen, Bette and Lara, Shane and Paige, Papi and Phylis and eveyone else (LOL). Glad Lara is letting it out somehow.
“it’s not the sex, it’s that it’s with you…” OUCH! No wonder our girl Lara is anguished aka, what-we-never-got-to-see-on-the-show. Thanks for keeping up her development, and hmm, I like the thought of her buidling something with Bette, if that is fitting with the larger scheme of things. OK, so now I REALLY miss her not being on the show. Thank goodness for your fanfic. Hope you are feeling better (bad stomach virus, BAD!) and PPS!
Very intense and dramatic. Good writing too. Looking forward to more…much more!
LOL Bepi! Brilliant. I’m really glad to see you developing Lara; I always thought there was more there. Not sure how much I see Bette and Lara… Though, true, Bette would actually eat then… I don’t know. I’m still adjusting to this new group dynamic, but I like it a lot and think you’re doing a really fantastic job with something that SO diverges from the usual groups/pairings. Fabulous. PPS
I’m with Probie on the couples! Hell yeah bring it on. Kace you’re doing a bang up job. Laura should start talking with some of the other girls. Good thing Carmen and Shane can be friends. I like Papi in this. Good job.
Geez! Lara’s really going through it. Papi obviously wants her friend on the phone (Tasha?) to hook up w/ someone but I wasn’t thinking Carmen, were you? I just think they are too much alike, & from the same area but you’re the writer if anyone can spin that, you can. Does Papi want Lara or Carmen? PPS.