Fan Fiction
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(Finally I See You)
Bette: Of course, I’m just going to go take a shower then we can head out since the morning sun is so beautiful, okay…
Tina: Sure, I’ll just sit here for a few more minutes and finish up this delicious coffee.
Tina winked at Bette. Bette gave Tina a peck on the lips then walk back into the bedroom. Once Bette left the kitchen Tina let out a big sigh, she was determined to put away all thoughts of the past 48 hours and try to make the best of this weekend and enjoy alone time with her wife.
In the bedroom, Bette pick up the last suitcase that needed to be unpacked, it was all the things that required a hanger. Although they were only staying for the weekend, Bette packed enough clothes to last her a month of stay. She picked up her expensive suit jackets and walked to the closet to hang them, that’s when she spotted the sloppy sandwich the little girl dropped laying on the floor and another object right next to it.
Bette: Fucking incompetent burglars!
Bette thought. Just then Tina walked into the bedroom, she heard Bette cursing under her breath but wasn’t sure why.
Tina: Bette what’s wrong?
Bette: Tina whoever broke into this cabin must have been the most incompetent idiots on the planet. Not only did they trash the place with food, they left evidence behind. Look at this disgusting sandwich I found, and oh yeah this was sitting right next to it.
Bette held out her hand and in her palms was a plastic head of a Barbie doll. Tina just stared at the doll head and immediately her thoughts drifted to the shadow or figure of the child she could have sworn she saw last night plain as day. She wondered into her own mind for second until Bette snapped her out of it.
Bette: Tina!
Tina: Huh, I’m sorry Bette what did you say?
Bette: I said, can you believe they must have had children with them when they broke into this place?
Tina: Um no, that’s insane right.
Bette: Tina sweetie, are you feeling okay.
Bette noticed the fluster look on Tina’s face.
Tina: yea sure, why you ask?
Bette: Well you just seem kind of…you know what forget it, how about we just get dressed and head out.
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cellphone48 says
OH! So good! Hurry up please and post again! PPS
wkm says
Thank heavens Bette saw her this time. Loved it, thanks
mamadoc91 says
Queue the music from “The Twilight Zone”…..
tibettenation1 says
lol..too bad she’s not a ghost
SassyGran says
You know how I hate cliff hanging TB, please continue asap! Please…..!
els73 says
Wow amaizing. Pps
lipitora says
I absolutely loved it. It was so good! Bette finally saw her. I’m looking forward to what they do now? Please posting soon :)
Bibi28 says
This is getting strange and freaks me out, but don’t worry, i am curious about how this wil develop!
Great to see Bette did see her too.
Hurry up with the next update, wanna know what is gonna happen now.
Great update!
mscully says
My God !!! this suspense is killing me.
For the love of my children not
delay posting another chapter.
10 stars.
kingg says
Eerie, TN1…this story is getting better than a beer truck pulling into my driveway!….Boom!…Snap!…Crackle!…Pop!..what a tearjerker and I’m not talking ‘ bout a guy who cries while he masterbates!…you my friend are an exceptional storyteller…oh yes you are!…treat me nice and on with your next update…xoxo….lubya
tibettenation1 says
thanks for all the wonderful comments