Fan Fiction
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(Finally I See You)
Bette rose up and stared Tina in the eyes.
Bette: You had an out-of-body experience?
Tina: Yeah I think I did.
Bette: Wow Tina that seem scary.
Tina: Well it gets weirder, so there we were as a family laying on the deck with Angelica in between us and then we all drifted off to sleep and the next thing I know, the dream goes into a another part where I’m watching Angelica wake up and then she just gets up and started playing by herself. My real body was calling out to us but we couldn’t hear me, so Angelica kept playing alone until she heard something in the woods nearby and began walking towards it.
Bette: Oh my God.
Tina: Yeah I know, all of sudden Bette, she walks towards the woods and just disappear and that’s when I started screaming her name and then…
Bette: that’s when I woke you up?
Tina: Yeah.
Bette: Baby I’m so sorry that all of this is happening but it was just a dream Tina and nothing more.
Tina: I’m not so sure Bette.
Bette just stared at Tina, trying to figure out what she was trying to say.
Bette: Tina?
Tina: Bette something else happened since then.
Bette: When?
Tina: Last night.
Bette was confused, the only thing they experience was the cabin getting broken into, so she wasn’t sure where all of this was going.
Bette: What do you mean last night?
Tina: It happen in the middle of the night. I heard a noise like someone was opening a door so I started waking up thinking maybe the burglars had come back and I was just about to wake up when…
Bette: When what?
Tina: I know this might sound crazy Bette and maybe I should go get some help, but I could of sworn…well I think I might have seen a child standing near the door but I couldn’t take the thought of actually seeing something like that so I closed my eyes tight and when I opened them, she was gone.
Bette: She?
Tina: She.
Bette remained silenced for a few seconds. The miscarriage was having an impact on Tina in a way she would never have thought. Tina was becoming delusional or in denial or something…Bette wasn’t sure exactly what was happening to Tina.
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cellphone48 says
OH! So good! Hurry up please and post again! PPS
wkm says
Thank heavens Bette saw her this time. Loved it, thanks
mamadoc91 says
Queue the music from “The Twilight Zone”…..
tibettenation1 says
lol..too bad she’s not a ghost
SassyGran says
You know how I hate cliff hanging TB, please continue asap! Please…..!
els73 says
Wow amaizing. Pps
lipitora says
I absolutely loved it. It was so good! Bette finally saw her. I’m looking forward to what they do now? Please posting soon :)
Bibi28 says
This is getting strange and freaks me out, but don’t worry, i am curious about how this wil develop!
Great to see Bette did see her too.
Hurry up with the next update, wanna know what is gonna happen now.
Great update!
mscully says
My God !!! this suspense is killing me.
For the love of my children not
delay posting another chapter.
10 stars.
kingg says
Eerie, TN1…this story is getting better than a beer truck pulling into my driveway!….Boom!…Snap!…Crackle!…Pop!..what a tearjerker and I’m not talking ‘ bout a guy who cries while he masterbates!…you my friend are an exceptional storyteller…oh yes you are!…treat me nice and on with your next update…xoxo….lubya
tibettenation1 says
thanks for all the wonderful comments