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(Finally I See You)
Tina: Yeah
Bette walked away as Tina just looked around the room.
At the lake, Tina and Bette were taking a slow stroll. Tina thought again about whether or not she should tell Bette about last night. They reached a nearby bank and took a seat on the benches and Tina decided now was the time. Bette had her arms around Tina, and Tina’s head were resting against Bette’s chest as they both looked out toward the lake, enjoying the fresh breeze.
Tina: Bette?
Bette: yeah?
Tina: I wanted to talk to you about something and I’m not sure how you will react.
Bette: Okay well whatever it is, can’t be that bad.
Tina: No it’s not bad at all, I just don’t want you to think I’m crazy.
Bette: I could never think that Tina, whatever it is you can talk to me.
Bette was squeezing and rubbing Tina’s shoulders, by the tone of her voice she knew that something serious was bothering Tina, so she wanted to comfort her.
Tina: Um well you know the other day when I told you about the child I seen in my dream…
Bette: Tina…
Tina: Just hear me out. I wanted to tell you the whole story. You see, you and I were at the lake, this lake in fact, enjoying some quality time together when all of a sudden someone tap me on the shoulders and there she was. Bette she was so beautiful and she had my features but looked more like you.
Bette: So I was the birth mother?
Tina: You see that’s the thing, although she looked more like you, it was me who gave birth to her.
Bette: How do you know?
Tina: I could literally still feel the pain and emotions of the day I given birth to her. It was so surreal but it was like she just showed up out of nowhere. I can’t explain it and I know I’m not making any sense right now but you two started goofing off and playing in the water splashing around and after a while you guys decided to get out and lay on the deck to relax. Bette the whole time my real body was standing over us watching the whole scene unfold.
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cellphone48 says
OH! So good! Hurry up please and post again! PPS
wkm says
Thank heavens Bette saw her this time. Loved it, thanks
mamadoc91 says
Queue the music from “The Twilight Zone”…..
tibettenation1 says
lol..too bad she’s not a ghost
SassyGran says
You know how I hate cliff hanging TB, please continue asap! Please…..!
els73 says
Wow amaizing. Pps
lipitora says
I absolutely loved it. It was so good! Bette finally saw her. I’m looking forward to what they do now? Please posting soon :)
Bibi28 says
This is getting strange and freaks me out, but don’t worry, i am curious about how this wil develop!
Great to see Bette did see her too.
Hurry up with the next update, wanna know what is gonna happen now.
Great update!
mscully says
My God !!! this suspense is killing me.
For the love of my children not
delay posting another chapter.
10 stars.
kingg says
Eerie, TN1…this story is getting better than a beer truck pulling into my driveway!….Boom!…Snap!…Crackle!…Pop!..what a tearjerker and I’m not talking ‘ bout a guy who cries while he masterbates!…you my friend are an exceptional storyteller…oh yes you are!…treat me nice and on with your next update…xoxo….lubya
tibettenation1 says
thanks for all the wonderful comments