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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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She was about to pull into the driveway but saw a figure sitting on her steps. At first, Bette thought a vagrant had invaded her porch…and then she wondered if it was Shane…maybe Shane couldn’t sleep. But no…as she stopped the car, afraid to startle the potential vagrant or a dismayed Shane, she looked harder in the darkness… ‘last time I remember, Shane was a brunette…’ she says to herself. Bette gets out of her car as quietly as she can. She walks slowly toward her front steps along the pathway and realizes, perhaps midway, that either the blonde had been listening to her rantings on the beach or God had…and placed this object of her discombobulation on her doorstep…Bette swallowed. She thought that maybe now was a good time to go back to her car and just drive away…go back to the shore…after all, what could she want? Maybe she had an argument with her brother…maybe she’s upset with her for…for what? Bette didn’t know what to think let alone what to wish for at this particular moment. Did she understand the look in Bette’s eyes earlier that evening? Or did she misunderstand them? ‘Oh for shit sakes…’ she thinks to herself before venturing forth…)
BETTE- “Tina?” (She’s spoken the name but her body is no less seized by fear and anticipation. Bette thinks of running to her car as she realizes that Tina hasn’t heard her. ‘Oh my, if she’s that deep in thought I really am in trouble,’ she thinks to herself. She slowly walks forward and finds herself in close proximity to the sitting, crouched figure…) “Fancy meeting you here…”
TINA- (Jumps and she gasps as Bette’s darkened figure approaches her before she realizes who it is and she starts to get up from the shock, startling Bette backwards at the same time…)
BETTE- (Steadying herself after having an almost mild heart attack…) “Wo! Easy there phantom lady! No sudden movements and no one will get hurt!” (Her hands are extended to calm the agitated blonde…)
TINA- (She lowers her raised hands and tries to catch her breathe from the near fright…) “Oh my God…you scared the crap out of me…”
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).