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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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BETTE- “Uhhhh…yeah well I’m not feeling too relaxed myself at the moment!”
TINA- (She stares at her, not knowing what to say…) “I…I’m sorry Bette…I just…I didn’t know…I’m sorry…”
BETTE- “It’s ok.” (She raises her hand up…) “It’s ok…I mean…it’s 3 in the morning, so I might be sorta wondering, once I figured out it wasn’t a vagrant stalking my house, why a beautiful blonde is sitting on my porch…but other than that…just another night in WeHo! Usually disgruntled girlfriends are Shane’s domain, so I usually know to direct them to the porch across the way, the odd time when said girlfriends make the mistake now and then in the wee hours of the morning, and they’re usually quite agreeable and make the move pretty easily…but…this…well…”
TINA- “Bette…” (Bette walks past her onto the porch towards the door…) “Bette?”
BETTE- “I’m going into my house now, phantom lady, and since my heart is still beating about 150 beats a minute, I’ll likely not go to bed right away, so care to join me?” (Tina’s eyes are wide and for a moment she’s not sure whether to be angry or embarrassed or…) “Tina…” (Bette walks up to her…) “Are you ok?” (Tina exhales and shakes her head…)
TINA- “I’m not sure I know anymore…I’m sorry…”
BETTE- “No no…it’s ok…I’m glad you’re here…come in…that is, unless you want to stay on my porch, and perhaps wait for one of Shane’s disgruntled friends to show up and you can commiserate…” (Tina gives her a look as though to say ‘ok, are you finished?’) “All right, I’m sorry…come in…my God woman, you almost gave me a heart attack…” (They enter and Bette turns on some lights.)
TINA- “Can I use your phone?” (Bette looks at her and nods, gesturing to the phone. Tina goes over and talks to Jeff…) “Hi sweetie…I’m fine. I’m at a friend’s. Just go to sleep…I’ll be fine. I don’t know yet. Just go to sleep. Ok. No problem. Good night.” (She hangs up and turns to find Bette pouring some wine as she sits on the couch.)
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).