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Lost & Found, Ch 11
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BETTE- “I assume you could use a drink?”
TINA- “Sure.” (She walks over and sits next to her. Bette gives her a glass and takes a swig of her own. Tina gulps a huge sip. They sit there parallel, with their elbows resting on their legs as they cradle their drinks. After a few long moments…) “I’m sorry, I didn’t want to make things weird…and I’m usually not so lost and peculiar, but I needed…I just…I had to…”
BETTE- (She interrupts calmly…) “You know where I was before I returned to find you staking out my place?”
TINA- (She smiles a bit…) “Girlfriend?” (Bette chuckles and then starts laughing, as Tina looks at her like she’s crazy…)
BETTE- (She laughs some more…) “Ahem…cough cough…sorry…NO, alas, while sometimes I’m temporarily possessed by a Shane Complex I’m afraid I’m just not quite so talented…” (Tina interrupts her overreaching answer…)
TINA- (Her eyebrows come together…) “I said ‘girlfriend’, not a bar full of sexy women all huddled around you waiting for every word…” (Bette does a quick double take and her eyes are wide open as she looks at Tina and they both start laughing…) “I mean I kinda figured out you’re no Shane…”
BETTE- “Oh shut up…” (Tina chuckles…) “Anyway, I was at the shore again. No, I don’t have a girlfriend…many women who wouldn’t mind spending some time with me…but no girlfriend. Anyway…so there I was…trying to release the inner demons to the winds. Been thinking about a woman who used to be in my life…she had these issues and it made things difficult…”
TINA- “Issues?”
BETTE- “She was straight…” (Tina moans and stands. She takes a step forward, looking away from Bette.) “Hey!”
TINA- “What!?”
BETTE- “Why do you do that?”
TINA- “What?”
BETTE- “Move around every time you’re uncomfortable…”
TINA- “I’m not uncomfortable…”
BETTE- (She stands…) “Are you planning on facing away from me the whole time?” (Tina turns to face Bette and looks agitated…) “Thank you. Now, as I was saying…”
TINA- “Bette please…I really don’t want to hear this story. I don’t think you should presume…”
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T, that was a great chapter! I wasn’t sure just what your Author’s Notes meant (a little lengthy BTW)LOL, but once I read the chapter, I realized just what you were referencing. It’s good to know that I am not the ONLY Chicki in the world! ROFLMAOOOOOOO!!!! You sure had me grinning! Thanks and Post Soon!
I’m glad they finally made it past all the past girlfriends (and the other party guests) to get together (at last). I think given the late hour that Tina should stay there until the morning (at least).
You out did yourself..my heart was palpatating. It was beautiful. Is this the end or the beginning?
Beautiful. I loved the dialogue between Bette and Tina – funny, yet touching.
Hello…thanks to the small crew that’s still hanging in there with this story! Seems you brave few are diminishing! Should I have put an “R” rating on it? :) I just don’t do R/NC17 stuff too well, so I tend not to travel that road too often. Anyway, I just wanted to thank you all for reading and commenting. I hope you have enjoyed this story. I think that this chapter could work as a fitting end to this story, so since the cycle of “lost and found” was closed in this installment, I think this will conclude the Merlin tales…at least for now. I don’t know what, if anything, is next, but I hope that if I continue, whether through this story or another, and whenever that may happen, that you will join me again. Cheers everyone. Thanks so much for all your support.
**sigh** (long peaceful pause) just wow, really, really wonderful, felt every word, just think I’m gonna sit here and wallow in it for awhile, don’t mind me…
So sweet. That was lovely, Merlin… but don’t end it there!! Of course I’ll be reading, regardless of rating. Thanks for the post.
So sweeeeeet! :) Thank you a lot, darling! So mature and and also so adolescent ;)
I was just saying in the last chaptert that I wished Tina would stop running. Glad to see it happen so soon. Great post T.
Man I am so far behind. I am on vacation and not near a internet connection most of the time. I finally was able to catch up with the last two chapters. It seems that both women have been terribly hurt but yet can not seem to stay away from each other. That is what love and companionship can do to someone. The yearning that is able to jump start one into going after the the one that he/she wants. They say that it is better to have loved then it is to never have loved. Whatever is true both are very painful.
That was awesome and love it. Please post more, thanks!
amazing fiction!
i talk crazy sometimes when i feel nervous and i just say first things that come to my mind until i find the right words, this chapter felt that way to me…
That was such a great chapter, I can´t wait, please update soon!
oh wow, intense they are…pps
OMG, go tina, my mouth is still open and i have happy tears in my eyes and i love forrest gump, merlin you amaze me every single time. This one has left me speechless, like it did with meam et tuam and again i’m not first!!!! thank you
beautiful! ah, what else can i say?
VERY, VERY, NICE T. I have been a silent (because I have been VERY bussy) reader, but please KNOW that I have been enjoying this story and hope that you choose to continue it. I would love to see all of the family and friends reaction the what has happen to these two. as well as how their relationship continues to grow. I have always loved your writing. Please return or continue at your own pace :o).