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    Lost In The Darkness

    ”I’m sorry this happened to you, I’m sorry that your life was cut short. But I promise, I will live for you, I will never forget you. You will forever be in my heart, but I set you free Ang, I am letting you go.”

    ”Thank you,” she said and hugged me. We walked to the door of her room and she opened it, ”I will always love you Tina.”

    ”I love you too Angie.”

    ”Take care of Bette, Jackson and your new baby girl,” she said and I looked at her, shock took over my body.

    I hugged her once again and then she pushed me through the door. I felt so groggy, my body felt so heavy, I had no idea the time or day but there was silence and the room was dim. I heard Bette’s light breathing, and I focused my eyes. She was sitting in the chair beside my bed and her head was resting on my bed her hands on my hand.

    ”Bette,” I said barely above a whisper and she didn’t move. I moved my hand and placed it on her head and I struggled to stroke her hair.

    ”Mmm,” I heard and then she stirred, ”Tee?”

    ”I’m here,” I said and she jumped up.

    ”Tee, oh my God baby, you’re awake,” she exclaimed and started kissing me and stroking my hair, ”I missed you so much baby, oh God.”

    ”Shh, it’s ok Bette.”

    Soon the doctor came in and examined me and Bette was on the phone with my mother and Kit, who would be bringing Jackson later that day. I was just so glad to be back, Bette stayed with me through everything.

    ”I was so scared Tee, I thought I would loose you.”

    ”How long was I asleep?”

    ”Almost a month.”

    ”A month?!”

    ”Yes, the longest month of my life.”

    ”It seemed like it was just a few minutes.”

    ”What do you mean?”

    ”I saw my cousin, Angelica, who died when we were eighteen.”

    I proceeded to tell her about Angelica. She listened to every detail of our life with interest. I talked without leaving a single detail out. And then I told her about my coma dream. She was amazed that all that was going on while I was sleeping.

    ”I heard a lot of what you were saying.”

    ”Really?”

    ”I heard you say I was pregnant.”

    ”I was hoping it would help.”

    ”It did, and we’re having a girl.”

    ”What? How could you possibly know? It’s too early to tell.”

    ”Trust me.”

    ”Of course, and we’ll call her Angelica.”

    Comments

    1. Wow OliviaKelly,

      You did a amazing job to upload the chapters so fast. And you posted a new chapter. Truly amazing!

      At first i thought it was Bette who was in a coma, but you had Tina living between dead and life.

      I am very happy that you let her wake in this chapter, many writers would have tortured us by letting her waking up after a couple of more chapters ????

      I am so happy you are back and I hope you will update 50 Shades of Bette Porter soon.

      Thanks again for coming back!

    2. OK,
      I so enjoyed this story first time round but loved how you posted these together, so quickly and added a Chapter. Thanks really great and look forward to you doing it with another of your stories.
      Also glad to see 50 Shades may be updated.
      Nice to have you back and look forward to more of your entertaining writing.
      SG

    3. I have enjoyed this story, don’t think I read it in the past. Hope that their accident was truly an accident and not caused by nadia or eric. nadia is one crazy fool and I fear for them while she is out of jail because I don’t think she will go away, quietly or otherwise. You have done a great job writing this one. Now i will go back and find your other stories to read. Patiently waiting for the next chapter. Thanks for posting the story.

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