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    Love Is A Fragile Thing 25

     

    “What?!” Dana hated to complain because that made her look like a ‘cry baby’ but she was not going to let this slide because 1: this was the finals in the Adidas Invitational and 2: the ball was clearly out and if they couldn’t see that she was going to make them see it. Before she could do anything the chair umpire saw that the last call was a mistake and overruled the last call. People were disappointed yes, but they would soon see the last replay and know that the ball was clearly out.

     

    Then 15 minutes later Dana was jumping in the air clearly excited about her win. Finally her drought was over. This was a great accomplishment for her and a lot of people knew that.

     

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    UP IN THE STANDS

     

    The girls were also jumping for joy. Bette picked Becky up and put her on her shoulders so she could see what was going on. People were clapping, whistling, for they knew that David once again has prevailed.

     

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    SPORTS BROADCASTERS

     

    “Awesome George, just awesome! This was an amazing come back.”

     

    “I agree Ann. Dana Fairbanks the great underdog at the Adidas Invitational. Not many people thought that she was going to make it and now look at what she has done.”

     

    “The chair umpire did a very good job on that previous call. For those of you who don’t know what I’m talking about, here is a replay.”

     

    They watched a replay of Schumacher’s ball going out.

     

    “I think after that Schumacher’s game dispersed into thin air. I wonder what she is thinking about right now. A big congratulations to Miss Fairbanks!”

     

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    THE FOLLOWING DAY

     

    All day Dana was busy with interviews after interviews, until that evening all the girls came together to celebrate Dana’s victory. The victory party was now being celebrated at the club. By that time Dana was the hot item, but she made sure that Lara was by her side the whole time.

     

    At Bette’s usual table sat her and Anna her Australian friend while all the others danced at the bottom floor. They sat watching them have a good time.

    Comments

    1. I am so happy to see you back with this story!!! I know it is hard to work your way through writers block, but you did a wonderful job with this chapter. You haven’t posted for months, and I didn’t even have to go back and read previous chapters…I knew exactly what was going on…so please, please continue with this wonderful story. Thanks!!!

    2. Thanks you so much for this chapter,Your story is like an old favorite,you dont forget it Bette and Tina are still so in love. I know that life and things gets in your way but so loved this story. Thanks and a million star for you.

    3. I’m one of the silent readers of fanfic and have never posted a comment before, but I just love this story and felt compelled to tell you so that hopefully you will continue with it. I’ve definitely missed your updates, please post soon.

    4. Coming out of lurking. Thanks so much for posting this chapter. I love this story and really missed it. It’s a great read and I look forward to your next post!

    5. Okay, you got me. I’ve been reading stories here since almost the very beginning and never commented until now. The fear of not knowing how this one ends has finally motivated me to comment. You HAVE to continue it! I’ve been waiting/looking for a new chapter every day since the previous chapter. I really love it and you must post again soon.

    6. Where on God’s little green Earth have you been? Do you know how much I’ve missed this story? I’m beginning to wonder if we readers are wearing out our fabulous writers?I’m really hooked on this story, I think it’s a great spin on Bette and Tina; not to mention I’m enjoying the new characters you’ve introduced. Please post again soon! We hate waiting for a good story line.

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