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    Love Is A Fragile Thing 25

    Story written on January 31, 2006 by raspberry.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59353
    Author Notes:

    About Dana some Bette. (I recommend you read the other chapters first in order to understand what’s going on here)

     

    “So what are you doing?”

     

    “What do you mean?”

     

    “Come on Bette every time you’re up here when you should be down there having a good time.”

     

    “Anna, I am perfectly having a time. There is nothing wrong with me if that’s what you are trying to say.”

     

    “You know that’s not what I’m sayingI just want you toI don’t know how to say this.”

     

    “What are you trying to say?”

     

    “Bette, you are a very close friend of mine and I just want you to be happy.”

     

    “I am”

     

    “Are you? Are you really happy?” she says looking closely at her.

     

    “Anna I just need more time, that’s all. I really appreciate your concern, I really do, Just give me more time.”

     

    They both were silent for a while just watching all the women get their groove on. And Bette finally decided that she has had enough of this serious talk. They were there to celebrate Dana’s victory and celebrate the family being together again.

     

    “Okay that’s enough.” She stands up.

     

    “What are you talking about?”

     

    “We’re here to celebrate, are we not?” She smiles and holds out her hand to her friend. Anna takes it.

     

    “Now go find your woman and get your groove on.”

     

    “You shouldn’t be talking Bette I’m going to make sure your ass is shaken. It’s time to really get this party started.” On their way down to the floor Anna signals to Carmen what song to play for Bette. She fans her face and says ‘Hot in Here.’ Carmen already knew what to play.

     

    Bette could hear the beat begin to change, she looked at Carmen and she twirled her finger around motioning her dance. Then she looks at Anna and she does the same.

     

    “This is crazy!”

     

    “This isn’t a party without at least one dance from you, you know that!” they were both trying to yell over the bass of the music vibrating through their bodies.

     

    Bette slowly began moving her hips.

     

    Hot in…..
    So hot in herre…..
    So hot in…..
     
    I was like, good gracious ass bodacious
    Flirtatcious, tryin to show patience
    Lookin for the right time to shoot my steam (you know)
    Lookin for the right time to flash them keys
    Then um I’m leavin, please believin
    Me and the rest of my heathens
    Check it, got it locked at the top of the four seasons
    Penthouse, roof top, birds I feedin
    No deceivin, nothin up my sleeve, no teasin
    I need you to get up up on the dance floor
    Give that man what he askin for
    Cuz I feel like bustin loose and I feel like touchin you
    And cant nobody stop the juice so baby tell me whats the use

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    2. I am so happy to see you back with this story!!! I know it is hard to work your way through writers block, but you did a wonderful job with this chapter. You haven’t posted for months, and I didn’t even have to go back and read previous chapters…I knew exactly what was going on…so please, please continue with this wonderful story. Thanks!!!

    3. Thanks you so much for this chapter,Your story is like an old favorite,you dont forget it Bette and Tina are still so in love. I know that life and things gets in your way but so loved this story. Thanks and a million star for you.

    4. I’m one of the silent readers of fanfic and have never posted a comment before, but I just love this story and felt compelled to tell you so that hopefully you will continue with it. I’ve definitely missed your updates, please post soon.

    5. Coming out of lurking. Thanks so much for posting this chapter. I love this story and really missed it. It’s a great read and I look forward to your next post!

    6. Okay, you got me. I’ve been reading stories here since almost the very beginning and never commented until now. The fear of not knowing how this one ends has finally motivated me to comment. You HAVE to continue it! I’ve been waiting/looking for a new chapter every day since the previous chapter. I really love it and you must post again soon.

    9. Where on God’s little green Earth have you been? Do you know how much I’ve missed this story? I’m beginning to wonder if we readers are wearing out our fabulous writers?I’m really hooked on this story, I think it’s a great spin on Bette and Tina; not to mention I’m enjoying the new characters you’ve introduced. Please post again soon! We hate waiting for a good story line.

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