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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“”Yeah – I just said – cheating whore “
Shane looked at Alice and shrugged “I can believe it of Carmen and I’m sorry that us having an open relationship would do this to one of my friends “
“You cannot be serious about taking her back! “ Helena said
“It’s an open relationship – we can both sleep with who we like – but I never thought that she would make a move on someone already taken “
“You will sleep with her after you know she’s slept with Sara?” Helena sounded angry
“It’s more complicated – we get on great and it’s a convenient set up for both of us. I am going to have to talk to her “
“Sara said she wanted to be with Carmen “Bette spoke
“Well that’s possible but what is also true is that Carmen isn’t the commitment type – she is horrified by anything that comes close to commitment. If Sara think she will swap one relationship with another she is wrong about Car “
“Well that cheers me up – stupid bitch has fucked up “Helena said
“Sara and Carmen don’t matter – what matters is you and what’s going to happen in the next couple of days “Bette said
“Oh just forget it will you Bette – I am up for a ass kicking from Peggy tomorrow – you two should be out when it starts because there will be blood on the walls – mine and on Monday its public humiliation time “
“Yes it matters Helena – you are “Bette began
“I am a prize jackass – and if I am lucky that is the least of what my mother will call me. Just drop it Bette – I am not in the mood for your optimistic thinking “
Bette opened her mouth but Tina rested her hand on Bette’s to gesture that she should stay silent – Helena was in no mood for anything constructive.
The group chatted about irrelevant topics until it was time to eat. After the meal Shane and Alice decided to head back to campus – Bette offered them a lift which they eagerly accepted. Left alone in the house Tina made herself busy washing up and sorting out some washing that needed to go into the machine. After ten minutes of silent work Helena padded into the kitchen and picked up a tea towel to dry the cups that Tina had just washed.
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!