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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“You still feeling crap?”
“Worse than crap “Helena confirmed
“Taking it out on Bette wasn’t fair “
“I don’t feel very fair. I feel angry and hurt and in the mood to lash out – that’s how I feel Tina “
“I would feel the same but Bette didn’t deserve all the snide comments about the two of us and how she can do no wrong in Peggy’s eyes “
“It’s hard having a perfect sister “
“Bette is a lot of things are perfect isn’t one of them “
“I remember you yelling at her one day that not everyone could live up to her exacting
standards “
“I did – I have said it more than once – but she’s human “
“What vices does she have Tina – even you get drunk now and again – I know the reason why you don’t and I respect that and we all understand that if we thought about it long enough – but – she is too good to be true sometimes. I feel like such a hedonist loser in comparison to Goody Two Shoes Porter “
“She’s normal. She doesn’t like alcohol, she won’t smoke because she is too obsessed about winning her races but please don’t tell her I told you this but she is the sorest loser around “
“Really? I always thought she was a good loser “
Tina laughed “Don’t believe it – she cannot stand losing to me – at anything. She sulks like a baby. It only really happened last term. I have beaten her a few times but one day we went for a run round the track and we did an 800 metre race. Now that’s my distance when I do track racing but she was beyond confident and I beat her into a pulp – I beat her by about ¼ of a lap. It wasn’t close – it was a whooping “
Helena laughed for the first time all evening
“Why am I only just hearing about this now?”
“Because we came off the track and went to get showered and changed and we ran into Lara and Dana and I told then. She won’t speak to me for the next hour – she just went crazy with me. Since then I have really hammered her and she takes it really badly “
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!