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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“That – that has actually cheered me up “ Helena said “Maybe there is hope for her “
“She’s thawing out “ Tina grinned “The famed Porter cool isn’t in place ALL the time I promise “
“Yeah – and you can unravel her quicker than anyone else “
Tina chuckled “Maybe “
“You have changed since the start of the year – it’s really noticeable “
“How so? “
“How assured you are – how – well how you are more sexually assured “
“Sexually? “
“In the way you dress and move. Your clothes are much more feminine and pretty. And you look really good in black like tonight “
Tina raised a telling eyebrow “Helena! “
“Its true – I’m not the only one to say this so don’t be telling Bette that I am coming onto you – I’m not – it’s just a statement of fact. Since you had more money you haven’t blown it like I would – but you have an eye for a nice shirt or top and the figure and colouring to show off most outfits really well. You are a heart breaker in the making Tina “
“I don’t “Tina began
“What I mean is that you and my sister don’t see how stunning you are as a couple. A Hollywood casting director looking for two lesbians to play some power couple in a hot new soap could not pick out two women who compliment each other so well while looking desirable to men and women “
“You seem to be less bitter “
“Oh I am still bitter but I know I shouldn’t be taking it out on the two of you. You two have done nothing but love each other and treat each other and everyone else with respect and love. Peggy’s right – you two are special “
Tina slapped Helena with the wet sponge she was using to wash to crockery with
“Be careful – if you are planning to have the part as the professional bitch in this lesbian drama of yours you need to be nastier to us than that “
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!