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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“God I am so lucky to have you “ Bette said
Tina looked up and smiled “ What was that honey ?”
“I said I am so lucky – God you are beautiful “
“I’m yours – you don’t need to flatter me “
Bette laughed and went into the bathroom to get ready for bed. When she walked back into the room Tina was still reading – Bette watched her while she tied her hair back. She turned the stereo on before she looked back at Tina
“How is Helena ? “
“Tired and fearing the worst from Peggy “
“I will talk to her in the car – see if I can talk her down. “
“She will be expecting that “
“I know “
Bette sat on the edge of the bed and touched Tina’s face. Tina raised an eyebrow
“We ended up having a conversation about Oscar Wilde “
Bette raised her eyebrow
“Ballad of Reading Gaol – written by him when he was in prison for basically being gay – each man kills the thing he loves – you must have heard that poem “
Bette shook her head “ I don’t know many poems “
“Philistine “ Tina replied grinning “ I can see I will have to educate you . I just love poetry – especially love poems – they seem very appropriate to me at the moment “
Bette smiled and lent forward – their lips touched. They kissed for several seconds until Bette pulled away and stared at Tina again
“There are times when I just cannot take my eyes off you “
Tina chuckled and put the book on her bedside table and turned back to look at her lover
“Why would that be ?”
“Because you blow me away – that hasn’t changed – in six months all that has happened is that I have fallen in love a bit deeper every day “
“Helena asked me if it didn’t get a bit boring with you being so perfect and I said that you weren’t but –“ she sighed “ When you sit there looking so freaking edible and you say such amazingly romantic things –then I remembered something else “
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!