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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“The sunny villa in the Italian mountains might get removed “
Helena shrugged “ I was lying in that prison cell – same one as before ironically enough and I just kept thinking about lying by the pool with Sara and I KNEW that it was the first thing that Peggy would say was going “
“There will be other villas “
“I know – God I feel so tired “
“Go to bed Helena – I’ll finish this off “
Helena nodded “Yes – I am SO looking forward to my mother arriving – what time is Bette setting off?”
“8AM “
Helena winched “Spoils your Sunday line in with the papers and a pot of coffee “
Tina grinned “Can’t be helped – expect her to be back around one –“
“What are you doing tomorrow?” Helena asked Tina before she left the kitchen.
“Keeping you company “
“The friendly jailer “
“Yet each man kills the thing he loves by each let this be heard – some do it with a bitter look, some with a flattering word. The coward does it with a kiss – the brave man with a sword “Tina quoted Wilde
“Yes – my mother does it with the bitter look and the closing of the cheque book “
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Bette arrived back and found the downstairs of the house empty – she looked around and smiled – everything was tidy – that might impress Peggy – then again. She made sure the doors were locked and made her way upstairs. Her room was dark and the door was open – meaning that Tina was in her own room and she had said earlier that she did not want to be alone. She opened the door and smiled at the sight that met her eyes.
Tina was sitting in bed wearing nothing but a very small vest with thin straps – she was reading. Bette tried to take it all in – the long blonde hair that was held back by a simple band, the perfectly soft skin that was tanned by their recent walking holiday and the simple gold chain around her neck.
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!