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Love & Pride – chapter 70
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“It’s a role I am seriously toying with – I think I have the natural flare “
“Yeah cos calling Sara a cheating whore is really stretching that expensive education funded by your mom “
“What term would you have used? “ Helena put the mugs back on the mug tree and looked at Tina
“Duplicitous bitch “she suggested
Helena sighed “What do you think about the whole mess?”
“That she didn’t love you enough if she could wake up beside Carmen and just decide that it wasn’t worth getting out of bed and pleading drunkenness to you and Shane. If she had said – look – we were both drunk and senseless I don’t know what happened if anything can we stay together – I’m sorry – well then I would have had some sympathy for her but to just assume that they had made out – well it makes me wonder if she knew all along that when she was drunk she would make a pass at Carmen. Who wouldn’t you make a pass at when you were drunk – in all honesty?”
Helena shrugged “Bette obviously – and probably Shane and Dana – everyone else would probably get some sort of drunken hug “
“Including me? “
“Yes – Shane – doesn’t do anything for me- far too much skin and bones – despite drinking like a flaming fish with a thirst problem and eating so much junk “
“And Dana -?”
“The same – too thin “
“So if you woke up in a bed with Alice you’d jump her bones?”
Helena laughed “Yeah – why not – she’s fun”
“Shall we take all of them out to dinner when Peggy is here? “
Helena burst out laughing – “Peggy and Alice – well I suppose they will met up on Monday – might be some gallows humour in that “
“I know things are crap right now but – well there are plenty of fish in the sea and Peggy does love you – she wants the best for you “
“I know that but – it hurts that I just get no say in things with Sara – its over – wham and well – I know that whatever I get from Peggy is what I will deserve “
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God I am Helena. Don’t tell anybody or you’d ruin my reputation as the worst Bette Porter addict ever!
Loved the sweet Bette and Tina stuff. They are the heart of the story. I don’t sympathize with Helena over her drunken exploits but the girlfriend thing sucks. However, she needs to just let stuff happen. She can’t try and force love just because she sees it with Bette and Tina. While they are really good friends to her.. I wonder if it wouldn’t be better for her if she didn’t live with them. PPS.
I really feel for Helena. Just when she is getting her self together. Life bite’s her in the butt. This sounds so familiar…..Hey it’s a bit like my life. lol
damn, i like helena. i feel bad for her and still for you. cheating, bad, bad, bad. thanks.
Poor Helena. Helena’s recital of what she knows about B & T’s sex life made me laugh but then think about my neighbors. Uh oh. Bette’s biggest flaw is that she is a sore loser? No wonder Helena is intimidated.
geeze louise, this version of Helena is like Bette in season 1, 2, and 3. one poo sandwich after another. When will you give her a break Ally? Hope your version of Helena is gonna be a strong one and not attempt to take the easy way out. Looking forward for an update.
Very very good! i love this chapter and i feel sorry about Helena cause i can imagine how difficult could be for her to see B&T happy and know that she cannot have that but just for a period of time caus her will find her perfect match it’s just take sometime. I realized either Laurel should have son clons or many of us will share her! take care!
Hey Ally, about the blone “Laurel” you never know what will happen, maybe she is close or in frond of you, you never see, well she is out there and you will meet her one day soon. Well take care my friend! Poor Helena, her life is drama and living hell, sad for her to see B&T happy and so in love. Well hope she will find her mate soon. Anyway please post soon, thanks!
A fresh wound is painful, but in time Helena, as all who lose in love, will realize that she’s better off for the loss of one unsuitable for loving her.
Oh I believe you on the Laurel bit. I like to think my own “Laurel” is out there too. :D
Poor Hel. How bad can it get… But they say everything happens for the best ;-) Great update Ally.
HEY Ally, Another fabulous chapter from your fine fingers. I just love the depth and honesty that you embody this terrific tale with. Bette and Tina are near perfect but both still have flaws. I adore the moments when Tina and Helena talk about real relationship and intimacy issues. They manage to speak from the heart. Bette is often a topic of conversation so it is wonderful to have her sister and lover discuss her. Tina sees the real Bette and is able to show that side to Helena. Now I can’t wait to see what mommy dearest will do. Please continue this must read melodrama soon. Much gratitude from Your Loyal Fan.
Ouch. :( I really feel bad for Helena. It’s one thing to be a fuck-up, but to overcome that only to get knocked back down again for one reason or another just freaking well sucks.
Poor Helena. She’ll find someone too eventually. As for you Ms. Ally, I will wish for you a blonde with hazel eyes. Great chapter babe!