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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 13

    Story written on June 1, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Bette & Tina arrive at The Planet to tell their HellNO story. Are the girls glad to see them?

    Sure, babe, Ill be fine. I cant wait to see their reactions. Dont forget the sonogram picture for Kit.

    Oops, thanks for reminding me. Ill just wait out here for a few. They shared a tender kiss and Tina headed toward The Planet.

    Alice, Dana, Jenny, Shane and Carmen were sitting at a table just kibitzing with one another.

    I wonder what TK has to say to us, Alice said.

    What makes you think she has something to say to us, Al? asked Shane.

    Well, we havent heard from her for a little while now and then she calls me and says we should all meet her at The Planet tonight. Shes got something to say, I can just feel it. I just hope she doesnt bring Hellacious with her. God, I cant tolerate that *****. Her nose is so ***** high up in the air that Im surprised she doesnt have constant nose bleeds. Christ, you dont think shes like going to run away with her or something, do you – Ill just puke right here in front of everyone if she tells us that.

    She must be good to Tina, dont you think? Tina wouldnt stay with someone that treated her badly, said Dana.

    Jenny piped in her agreement with Dana.

    Tinas still blinded by her anger and hurt and Porter is just beside herself because Tina wont even speak to her. I swear shes like this coiled spring ready to pounce. Weve all seen the wrath of Bette Porter, guys – well, I know I have, said Alice.

    Look, we all know Tina still loves Bette. At least I know it. They belong together, thats it, said Shane. Helena just swooped in and picked up Tina at a time when she needed to be picked up and pampered a bit.

    Yeah, well, guess what, Yoda, that was ***** six months ago. Pamper my *****. Dump the ***** already – ***** jerkweed, barked Alice.

    Youre so good, Alice, at not saying what you feel and twice as good at tempering your dislike for someone. We love that about you, said Shane.

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    1. I have read the story every chapter of the way but refrained from commenting..for no damn reason really..LOL But i just gotta say it today..a jackie chang action flick got NOTHING on your story…*haha* Those girls could be power rangers of a very hot sort ;-)
      Seriously…I LUV reading every new chapter. Awesomely written, a lot of wit, action, activity, and great way with words.
      “She’ll be julienne slicing your petard and shoving it down your throat.””.–thats a CRACKIN line!!!Hats off!! :-D

    4. Megga- Another great chapter. Awww, Alice was such a good defensice friend! Even though she was wrong, she just did it cause she loves Tina! Please post again soon!

    6. I love this line – “Ha, don’t be using metaphors like that with Alice. She’ll be julienne slicing your petard and shoving it down your throat.” They both laughed. Yeah, Alice would definitely do that. You have a real way with words!

    9. Brilliant story, keep it coming, poor Alice getting the wrong end of the stick, so to speak, thinking Bette could hurt Tina that way. Any looking forward to your next chapter, post soon please.

    11. WHoa! Alice can be a bit scary! LOL! That was really good! Never a dull moment with these girls, huh? I am already looking for your next post!

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