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    Love Revisited – Coming Home Part 13

    Story written on June 1, 2005 by arceextl.
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    Bette & Tina arrive at The Planet to tell their HellNO story. Are the girls glad to see them?

    They all laughed and Dana leaned over and kissed Alice on the cheek.

    Ay, youre all nucking futs.

    The conversation between them went to other things. Shane was doing her usual scan of a place – not checking out anyone or for anyone. It was just what she did. Her hand was on Carmens knee. She gave it a gentle squeeze. Carmen replied with a smile, then a quick but tender kiss.

    As Shanes eyes reached the door of The Planet, she saw it being pulled open and saw Tina enter.

    Tina! Hey, TK They all waved her over. Wow, thats one pregnant lady, they all were thinking. And she looks pretty amazing, too.

    Tina made her way to their table, pulled out a chair and sat her very pregnant body down, putting her hands in her lap.

    Okay, TK, whats up? You look great, by the way. Even your eyes are twinkling. Whats going on? Al asked in her best investigative voice.

    Al, what makes you think I have anything to tell you. Cant I just get together with my friends that I havent seen for a while and share some food and catch-up with them?

    You really look amazing! Jenny and Carmen said in unison.

    Thanks. I feel pretty amazing, too.

    Alices eyes narrowed as she looked at Tina. Somethings going on here – I smell it. Her eyes honed right in on a really nice size love bite to the rear of Tinas right ear, pretty close to her hairline.

    What, did the vampire have her feeding earlier today, Tina? Alice asked.

    What? Oh Tina blushed as she saw Alice direct her eyes to the right side of Tinas face. Everyone elses eyes followed Alices.

    Look, guys, I do have something to tell you. Something not too terrific happened yesterday –

    I knew it – I just knew it! Spill it, TK. said Alice.

    Just then the door to The Planet opened. Alice looked up and saw Bette enter. Oh, *****, Tina, Bette just walked in.

    Tina lifted her hands from her lap, placed them on the table to give her some purchase as she turned around to look at the door.

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    1. I have read the story every chapter of the way but refrained from commenting..for no damn reason really..LOL But i just gotta say it today..a jackie chang action flick got NOTHING on your story…*haha* Those girls could be power rangers of a very hot sort ;-)
      Seriously…I LUV reading every new chapter. Awesomely written, a lot of wit, action, activity, and great way with words.
      “She’ll be julienne slicing your petard and shoving it down your throat.””.–thats a CRACKIN line!!!Hats off!! :-D

    4. Megga- Another great chapter. Awww, Alice was such a good defensice friend! Even though she was wrong, she just did it cause she loves Tina! Please post again soon!

    6. I love this line – “Ha, don’t be using metaphors like that with Alice. She’ll be julienne slicing your petard and shoving it down your throat.” They both laughed. Yeah, Alice would definitely do that. You have a real way with words!

    9. Brilliant story, keep it coming, poor Alice getting the wrong end of the stick, so to speak, thinking Bette could hurt Tina that way. Any looking forward to your next chapter, post soon please.

    11. WHoa! Alice can be a bit scary! LOL! That was really good! Never a dull moment with these girls, huh? I am already looking for your next post!

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