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Luau (Chapter 2)
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“Dance with me baby,” she said in a tiny voice.
Alice laid her head on Dana’s shoulder swaying in the safe shelter of her arms. She felt Dana’s lips brush her pulse point and turned her head to capture them with her own. Dana knew this was the moment she’d been waiting for and her nerves disappeared.
“Al?” Her voice was soft but clear. “Will you marry me?”
“I already did silly,” Alice murmured.
Dana sank to her knees and held Alice’s hand.
“I know you did,” she smiled. “Let me try this again. I can’t imagine living a day without you. Everything I do, everything I am, is for you. Alice Piezecki Fairbanks, will you do me the honor of becoming my wife –again?”
Alice was speechless. A thousand thoughts ran through her head, all of them yes, and she was powerless to articulate a single syllable. She bit her lip and furrowed her brow as she attempted to form the word, but instead nodded her head ever so slightly.
“Is that a yes?” Dana was reading her perfectly, but for a fleeting second thought maybe Al was going to say no.
Alice found her strength and pulled Dana to her feet, streaming tears glistening in the bright light of a full moon that had risen quickly.
“YES that’s a yes,” she warbled. “It’s the most definite, absolute yes in the entire world, but on one condition.”
“What’s that?” Dana’s eyes crinkled with happiness. Only Al could make the unconditional conditional.
“Will you marry me right back?” Alice asked seriously.
“Of course I will,” Dana said, kissing Alice firmly before resting her forehead against Al’s and dancing again. “We’re going to have our ceremony right here, just us. Well, just us, the officiant, our witness and the video guy.”
“That’s a lot of people for just us,” Alice chuckled.
“I know but that’s the price we have to pay to make formal vows to each other,” teased Dana. “And now our housewarming luau will be our wedding reception. I wanted everything to be just like you used to imagine it.”
Alice flashed on their brief conversation the morning after Bette and Tina’s wedding and realized that Dana had been planning this since that very moment. She slipped out of her robe and opened Dana’s, molding them into one. Before long Dana’s robe was a memory and they swayed together to Elvis Costello, locked in endless kisses until their knees began to buckle.
They managed to stumble to one of the low chaise lounges on the beach just past the lanai. Dana wrapped her arms and legs around Alice as she tucked in and leaned back, pulling a light chenille throw loosely over their hips. The magnificent night sky sparkled with uncountable stars. Alice and Dana studied it together in silence, alabaster skin bathed in moonlight, one with each other and their world on this most remarkable night.
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!