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Luau (Chapter 2)
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“I’m sorry to disturb you Miss Dana,” Joseph said quickly, “but it’s ten past seven and you were so specific about the sunset.”
“No, no, it’s okay Joseph,” Dana blushed, leaving a confused Alice as she bounded from the bed. “Did we miss it?”
“No, ma’am. Everything is ready, whenever you and Miss Alice are.”
“Thank you.” She rang off and grabbed the silk robes from the bench at the foot of the bed.
“Come on, dinner’s ready.”
“Dinner can wait.” Alice crawled to the end of the bed and held out her hand, thinking Dana would join her. “We’ll order room service later.”
“No, it can’t, not tonight,” Dana smiled. She took Al’s hand and pulled her to her feet, wrapping her in the robe and practically pushing her through the cottage towards the lanai.
“Dane…” Alice whispered as she took in the most romantic setting she’d ever imagined.
Votive candles flickered in crystal holders from every corner and surface, creating a soft, textured light that would only become more beautiful as the evening surrendered to the moonlit night. Orchids and roses lined the path to their table, impeccably set for two, silver domes covering each plate, an ice bucket sitting to the side. The mix CD that they’d made together as Dana recovered played softly in the background.
“Is it okay?” Dana felt a flutter of nervousness.
“Okay?” Alice stopped and pulled a bottle of Heineken from the ice bucket. “I think it’s perfect.”
She sat in the chair Dana pulled out for her and laughed when Dana place the crisp napkin in her lap. Next came the removal of the domes, accomplished with an exaggerated flourish, revealing the most delectable cheeseburgers Alice had ever seen, complete with well-done french fries, drenched in chili and onions. Dana’s goofy grin disguised her growing anxiety as she watched Al attack her supper. Alice’s eyes met hers mid bite.
“What?”
“Nothing,” Dana looked away, afraid she’d give herself away.
“Hey,” Alice said gently, taking Dana’s hand in hers. “What is it?”
“You are so beautiful,” Dana said. “I’m just trying to memorize every detail about tonight.”
The sun dipped lower, slipping halfway behind the horizon, staining the skies in oranges, blues and streaks of pink while they ate. The last vestiges of the twilight evaporated as Dana removed the final silver dome, revealing a fondue pot, bubbling with chocolate, and a platter of strawberries and fresh pineapple spears. They fed each other, kissing away the occasional drip and drizzle until Dana at last heard her cue, the Van Morrison song she’d given Alice.
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!