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Luau (Chapter 2)
There are all kinds of bad tired, but the good tired, that’s a rarity. Alice and Dana cringed when the alarm went off at 7:30, having gotten but three hours of sleep, yet they were both radiant.
“I’ll help you put the living room back together,” Dana said, kissing Al good morning. “I’m going to go pick some oranges, make some juice and some coffee and cut up some fruit while you shower and then I’ll rinse off.”
“Under most circumstances, I’d agree that that is a practical plan,” Alice responded, wiping the sleep from her eyes. “But I did tell Shane to bring breakfast. Come shower with me.”
“Believe me, I am soooooo tempted,” Dana nuzzled Al’s earlobe before jumping up, earning a disappointed groan from Alice, who flopped onto her back in protest.
“But?”
“But we would still be otherwise engaged when she gets here.” Alice smiled at the truth of that. “And, think about it…what’s Shane’s idea of a great breakfast?”
It was a no brainer.
“Chili dogs and triple shot espressos never killed us before.”
“I’m not saying it will this time,” Dana pulled Al to her feet and pointed her to the bathroom, “but we were never trying to get pregnant before.” She patted Alice’s firm ass and sent her on her way.
Shane’s concession to health was to add pineapple and fresh tomatoes to the pepperoni pizza she brought.
“Nice, Yoda,” Al teased when she opened the box. “Dane will be down in a minute.”
“I’m kind of glad that we have a sec to ourselves,” Shane mumbled. “I want to tell you again how sorry I am…”
“No need.” Alice laid a hand on Shane’s arm and looked her in the eyes. “It doesn’t matter.”
“It does, but thank you.” Shane took a gulp from her ever-present paper coffee cup, as Dana joined them, hair as wet as Alice’s. ”You guys got a big day planned?”
“Not really,” Dana accepted a glass of juice and kissed Alice on the cheek. “Just going buckle down and get as much accomplished as we can this week so everything will be in order when we go.”
“Go where?” Shane’s heart sank.
“Dane’s taking me to Maui with her.” Alice’s smile was so irresistible even Shane felt a little brighter.
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Thank you so much for the new story! I loved Lucky and am loving this one, too. You do a great job writing Danish romance. PPS!
I like you’re proposal I wish mine could be like that (and also the sex but that’s just between me and the brackets) I can’t wait to see about the dolphin swim and I can’t wait to see the ceremony basically I can’t wait so post now (on another note I’m not one to beg for more sex in an already NC-17 story and I do realize that your sex scene is quite long and that this isnt a PWP but can I get a twofer?) Love ya mama b post soon (or give me a snip…actually minus the or GIVE ME A SNIP!!!) :please:
Yay! you’re back – you know how I feel about your writing and how it’s uber exquisite and fanfracking wonderful – fan fic land is so much fuller with you in it – I’ll step away from the fan girl box now – oh yeah – loving the new story :)
WOW!! just wow you are amazing i loved every inch of that post so sweet.. so talented man :)
Awww, what a beautiful proposal! The way you write these two is just incredible. I’m also liking the idea of Shane and Beth. I’ve sort of stopped liking Carmen since she was such a bitch in Season 3, and honestly I think Beth would be better for her. Either way, though, this is great, even if it’s only a “dip your toe back in” kinda story.
Is it me or are these scenes getting steamier and steamier??? What can I say I love, love, love this!!! Very loving, Very romantic…I love the way you write these two!!! PPS!
This is my first comment because English is not my first language so I’m kind of shy writing this…but I guess you deserve it ;). Your stories are great and this one is a perfect example. I really enjoy the way you write Danish (and Dave hihihi!!!)…so please post soon!!!
That was sooooo beauitful and veryyyy romantic WOW!!!! Your such a awesome writer and please continue!!!!!!!!
*sigh* Thank you. I’mnot sure what else I can say. I’ve said it all about 200 times. But yeah…this was fucking amazing! And when it comes to NC-17…Jesus Fucking Christ…yeah…Thanks! (as for the crack monkey thing…lmao. Yeah…I have no idea where that came from…haha.) POST SOON SAMMY!