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Lucky – Chapter 24
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The dinner was relaxing and the food gorgeous as always. Tina was being quite bubbly; Bette mostly listened, enjoying her stories. Once they had both washed the dishes Bette went to dig out her book, returning to the living room – this is the moment she had been waiting for. She felt herself instantly relax as she settled into the sofa, she took a sip of wine, placed the glass back down and opened her book. This is the moment that Tina chose to launch her self over the back of the sofa.
“Christ” Bette jumped. “T, I really just want to relax for a bit OK? Just to unwind”.
“You know I can help you with that right?” Tina winks, and drops into the floor seductively crawling towards Bette.
“T, go back to the sofa, sit down and quietly watch TV. I need at least 30 minutes, just to read my book. OK babe?”
The playful blonde pouts.
“Just 30 minutes” Bette says, almost giving in to the pouting.
“Ughhh” Tina sulks moving back, and slumping down on to the sofa. Quietly mumbling, “boring”, as she flicks on the TV.
Bette looks up but decides to ignore the comment. Again, she opens the book, focusing on the first paragraph.
“Hmmmm, mmmm, mmm, mm, mm.” Bette closes her eyes, looks up and opens them, focusing on Tina, humming away to some random tune. Tina stops, as she feels Bette’s eyes burning into her.
The brunette again begins to focus on her book, managing to take in the first 2 sentences. She looks up at the TV for a few moments to see a serious case of channel hopping. “T, Tina, for gods sake will you please pick a channel and stick to it.”
“Mooody” the mischievous blonde whispered, catching a stern look from Bette, deciding it would probably be in her best interest to stay on the channel she had picked. A few moments had passed, and Tina was still restless, all she wanted to do was mess around with Bette, it wasn’t fair.
“Is it a good book?” She asks, Bette ignores her, but it still requires her to go back to the beginning of the paragraph. The final straw finally came, “tap, tap, tap, tap” as Tina flicked the back of the TV remote. Bette was still looking down at her book, but unbeknown to Tina her eyes were looking directly at her, noticing the small smirk on the blondes face.
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Hey, I ran… After running(jogging), I came and read ur story. Cant help it. May be I am not in for BDSM, but ur story is keeping me glued.Read ur PM.
Please come back soon.Great story.
Fab updates, loving it! More soon x
Wondering what’s going to happen next as well. Great story. thank you.
More soon, please!!
So excited to see another post from you so soon, but sad to see the word “hiatus.” I think you’re a unique and intense writer and I have truly enjoyed every chapter. Although the hiatus is well deserved, how long is “little”? I hope it is only as long as Bette’s trip to NYC! You are opening the eyes of many by portraying these two characters as a dedicated and loving couple who understand each other’s basic needs and thrive on them together. Hope you can post again very soon so the hiatus can get started and finished sooner. ;) Thanks for giving us this story. I’ll miss it.
great update. thanks for your note as well. while I have never been into BDSM I can say that after reading this story I understand it more. You couldn’t really depict real love at the beginning because it was too soon. Now that they have established that they have mutual love, desire, respect (ie. the contract)the possibilities are endless. So I hope you come back soon from your hiatus with some more juiciness!
Wow “Hurt … I love it when you hurt me.” “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me … show me who’s boss” – and then leave me for 4 days by myself… very interesting.
Hey Bayley, Thank you for two fabulous chapters. Firstly Bette needed some reprimanding to understand Tina’s limits. This was very difficult for our Alpha but necessary.Tina was correct in using this cause to get Bette to fully appreciate her errors.Then having Bette make love to Tina showed hown much their relationship had grown.They are truly a couple.The next chapter had Bette re-establish her dominance over Tina. The use of Tina as a stool was elemental in getting her to accept that she had to do what her Domme wants her to do. Bette kissing Tina’s sore spots was equal reward.Given that they will be apart for several days, I can appreciate Tina’s need to feel her mistress’s presence.There can be a delight in feeling the pain of a previous day’s spanking whenever you sit down. It takes you right back to that instance and all of the emotions it contains. Perhaps Tina needs this type of reminder.I can’t wait to find out what Bette has in store for her sub.Please don’t stay away too long. I miss your wonderful words.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A hiatus! What! What will we do with out your regular updates lol… awaiting the next chapter but not the hiatus ;) thanks a bunch for sharing and for giving us something different…
That was good!