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Lucky – Chapter 24
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‘Right, that is fucking it’, Bette thought as she slowly placed the book on the arm of the chair. “T honey” she said quietly and seductively.
‘Ha, I knew she would give in’ Tina thought victoriously, looking up to see Bette reeling her in with her index finger. She muted the TV, placing down the remote.
“Crawl to me” Bette says, leaning back in to her chair and slowly opening her legs.
Tina is instantly on the floor; she had been waiting for this all day. She slowly begins to crawl towards Bette, trying her best to look the picture of innocence. She reaches the armchair, not quite sure what her next move should be, that question was soon taken out of her hands as Bette lunges forward without warning grabbing a fist of her hair. Tina let’s out a yelp. It’s not enough to hurt too much, but manages to send the message Bette is about to deliver.
“I said T, all I need is 30 minutes, and then I’m all yours. But you always want to have your own way don’t you. Well not this time baby. Now I want you to kneel before me, and shut the fuck up”. Bette releases Tina’s hair. “On your hands and knees” Tina immediately obeys, kneeling sideways to Bette in front of the sofa. She feels a cushion on her back, Bette leans forward her face close to Tina’s. “Now I’m going to finish reading this chapter, in peace and quiet, so be a good girl and keep that cute little mouth of yours shut.” Tina is still in shock so simply nods. “Oh – “ Bette begins, as she swings her feet up on to the cushion on Tina’s back, “And be a good little footrest, and stay the fuck still”.
Bette leans back, looking down at an obedient and stunned Tina. Now it is Bette’s turn to smirk. ‘Right where was I’, the satisfied Brunette picks up her book, opens it to where she placed her bookmark and for the first time that night loses herself in the story.
Sometime later Bette is pulled from the book before her when she feels Tina readjusting herself under her feet. Bette lowers her book smiling at the sight before her. ‘Her knees must be getting pretty sore’ Bette thought. ‘I think she has learnt her lesson.’ Bette finishes the page she is on and places the book on the side. She slowly removes her feet from Tina and places them on the floor, leaning forward, tucking a strand of hair behind Tina’s ear.
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Hey, I ran… After running(jogging), I came and read ur story. Cant help it. May be I am not in for BDSM, but ur story is keeping me glued.Read ur PM.
Please come back soon.Great story.
Fab updates, loving it! More soon x
Wondering what’s going to happen next as well. Great story. thank you.
More soon, please!!
So excited to see another post from you so soon, but sad to see the word “hiatus.” I think you’re a unique and intense writer and I have truly enjoyed every chapter. Although the hiatus is well deserved, how long is “little”? I hope it is only as long as Bette’s trip to NYC! You are opening the eyes of many by portraying these two characters as a dedicated and loving couple who understand each other’s basic needs and thrive on them together. Hope you can post again very soon so the hiatus can get started and finished sooner. ;) Thanks for giving us this story. I’ll miss it.
great update. thanks for your note as well. while I have never been into BDSM I can say that after reading this story I understand it more. You couldn’t really depict real love at the beginning because it was too soon. Now that they have established that they have mutual love, desire, respect (ie. the contract)the possibilities are endless. So I hope you come back soon from your hiatus with some more juiciness!
Wow “Hurt … I love it when you hurt me.” “whip me, bite me, bruise me, mark me … show me who’s boss” – and then leave me for 4 days by myself… very interesting.
Hey Bayley, Thank you for two fabulous chapters. Firstly Bette needed some reprimanding to understand Tina’s limits. This was very difficult for our Alpha but necessary.Tina was correct in using this cause to get Bette to fully appreciate her errors.Then having Bette make love to Tina showed hown much their relationship had grown.They are truly a couple.The next chapter had Bette re-establish her dominance over Tina. The use of Tina as a stool was elemental in getting her to accept that she had to do what her Domme wants her to do. Bette kissing Tina’s sore spots was equal reward.Given that they will be apart for several days, I can appreciate Tina’s need to feel her mistress’s presence.There can be a delight in feeling the pain of a previous day’s spanking whenever you sit down. It takes you right back to that instance and all of the emotions it contains. Perhaps Tina needs this type of reminder.I can’t wait to find out what Bette has in store for her sub.Please don’t stay away too long. I miss your wonderful words.Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan and Friend.
A hiatus! What! What will we do with out your regular updates lol… awaiting the next chapter but not the hiatus ;) thanks a bunch for sharing and for giving us something different…
That was good!