Fan Fiction
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Lynx
DANA-sure can
ALICE- oh and dont be too long we have to go shopping for the baby shower
DANA- the baby shower isnt for another 2 weeks (
(alice walks into the living room while brushing her hair))
ALICE- i know but, im throwing it, so i figure the least i can do is get a head start, ya know, so everything is perfect.
DANA- al, you said that kit was planning and all we were doing was sending out invites, i mean i have alot to do withing these next few weeks a baby shower is the last thing i need to worry about.
ALICE- well fine, im sorry, ill, just do the shopping and planning myself. Kits too busy she has alot to deal with. Between the planet and her dad dying i figured we . i , could help out some way. But its fine, i can do it alone. Just go, ill be fine.
DANA- no you wont, why , why do you do this to me?
ALICE- do what
DANA- its like no matter what relationship im in i feel like everyone is always depending on me for something somehow someway, but i never seem to know about it until the very end. ALICE- D , what are you talking about?
DANA- i just dont know anymore alice, maybe , I Should…i dont know…ill be back later.
((DANA WALKS OUT AND SHUTS THE DOOR BEHIND HER. ALICE REOPENS THE DOOR CALLING OUT TO DANA))
ALICE- dana, DANA! WHAT THE *****
((Shane pulls up to carmens apartment complex))
CARMEN- what are you doing? i thought we were going to the planet?
SHANE- well i just decided not to. I have some stuff to go over at the shop.
CARMEN- well i dont mind going with you shane.
SHANE-well thats cool and all , but i do , i mean. Look i just have alot to get done
and i dont need any distractions.
CARMEN- distraction huh,? Are you upset shane, is something bothering you ?
SHANE- no , no theres nothing. why cant you just take it for what it is.
CARMEN- well it would be nice if i knew what ‘it’ was.
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Carmen doesn’t feel the same way?!Please don’t let it be so:( Carmen love her:) Can’t wait til next chapater!
Humm Shane only said “i love you” to Carmen because she knew already that Carmen is in love with her…remember ? The Real Deal thing ?? Please thats so NOT Carmen. I will be waiting for your next chapter.
Its great. More!
interesting…go on