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    Lynx

    Story written on June 12, 2005 by angylmyana.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=54679
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    Shane is caught between helping a friend and learning to love.
    While dana and alice are still in the middle of the mountain, of their relationship decision

    SHANE- ill swing by tonight and pick you up for the dinner. ok?

    CARMEN- yeah, ok, fine. Dont work too hard.

    SHANE- never do.

    ((shane pulls off as carmen stands on the sidewalk, biting her nails, with an uneasy look on her face.She turns and starts walking towards her apartment))

    ((Alice is lying on the couch in a towel with a green face mask on reading a magazine))

    DANA- Al!, nice look. Is this a new skin beautifier?

    ALICE- actually it is. Its guacamole and spinach cream, with egg yolk. Its totally refreshens my skin, ill look 16 again by the time this stuff fully sets in.

    DANA- well whatever works for you. But i think you have the most angelic face in the world and you dont need any of this *****.

    ALICE- is this your apology?

    DANA- apolo– for what!?

    ALICE- for earlier, dana, hello you were a total *****!

    DANA- no AL! this wasnt an apologetic moment it was a freakin compliment , take it and bail, i have no reason to apologize.

    ALICE- so you are still thinking about leaving?

    DANA- i NEVER said anything about leaving ALICE!, what is wrong with you ?

    ALICE- oh , yeah well it was kind of like, a hint when you couldnt finish your sentence with certainty. I mean just tell me dana, i mean are you ready to walk out of this relationship, cause i mean i dont want to play games ya know there is a WHOLE DAMN WORLD out there for me and stuck on a planet of the unknown here with you and its KILLING ME , SO WHAT IS IT THAT YOU WANT!

    DANA- AL, i— are you crying, are, i mean i cant really see alot reflecting off of that mask, but you, alice are you crying?

    ALICE-NO! im not, im not crying, and you want to know why im not crying dana, im not crying because 3 years ago i vowed to never again in my life, to cry over someone who didnt love me, or care enough to pay attention to how much i loved them.

    DANA- then maybe thats why you’re crying.

    ALICE- oh and whats that suppose to mean DANA?

    DANA- it means that i do love you AL, and if you want to cry, im caring enough to stay here and hold you , and at least try, to make it better for you.

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    2. Humm Shane only said “i love you” to Carmen because she knew already that Carmen is in love with her…remember ? The Real Deal thing ?? Please thats so NOT Carmen. I will be waiting for your next chapter.

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