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Masked Feelings CH 10
Lara was at what she now reffered to as her new home. She was going to have it all now. She earned the right to call Dana her’s.
You lose, Alice. You’re at the bottom of the food chain, I’ll eat you alive everytime. You’ll never get her now. So how are you this morning? I’m curious… I might have to pay you and visit later and see for myself…. yeah, I think I will.
Lara thought it was all settled, Dana and her would get married and have a family, live happily ever after. Dana had a different future planned out.
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Dana was having a phenomenal day on the court. Winning her first matches of the day. She could relax for a couple hours before she moved on to the quarter-finals. Her cell phone rings….
Dana – Hello?
Tina – Hey, Dana!
Dana – Tina, Good to hear from you…. Did you call to wish me good luck?
Tina – I always wish you luck, well…. are you winning?
Dana – So far I am… the quarter-final is in about two hours.
Tina – That’s great. So how do you like having your own private cheering section?
Dana – Huh?… What are you talking about?
Tina- Now you’re playing with me, Dana. I know Alice is there with you.
Dana – Have you been drinking, T. I don’t know what you’re talking about. Alice is at home…. isn’t she?
Tina – This isn’t funny, Dana. Please put Alice on the phone.
Dana – Tina, I’m telling you, she isn’t here.
Tina – OH GOD…. something happened then. She decided she wanted to drive there last night, to see you.
Dana – What? Why?
Tina – You may as well know…. She’s been talking to me about you and all thats happened.
Dana – OH…. not all of it, I hope.
Tina – Everything, Dana.
Dana fell silent.
Tina – It’s ok, Dana. I really do understand…
Dana – Where could she be?
Tina – I don’t know. Let me make some calls and I’ll try to find out something.
Dana – I’m going to do the same. Call me if you find something out.
Tina – I will. Please don’t worry… I’m sure she’s fine.
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(63 votes, average: 4.21 out of 5)
I wonder how Gina is going to respond to what Lara did to Alice. Thank you for making Lara so evil. Now I have a reason not to like her. And yes, you are killing me, but it’s so good! lol
Hmmm..I enjoy the evil Lara. I just hope Dana can see through her crap. AH, the suspense.lol
damn! poor alice…she really is just a shell of a woman. oooh i can’t wait for dana to put all the pieces together….after that…IT’S ON!! i’m gonna enjoy that hellish chapter. ^ – ^
Better Dana figures out now! Poor Alice, Damn Lara for some I never like you :D
EVIL,just pure EVIL thanks
OK WTF?!..she friggin screamed NOooo like her life depended on it..Tina, Bette,&Nurse Karem R smrt Ladiez..they g2kno that Lara is the sik fuk that did this shit2Alice..4real Lara thnks no1 would b-lieve Alice – well screw that!..her friends will b-lieve her with out a doubt! :) PLZ no mre Pain mang!..Jus get rid of that fuking physcotic sadictic bitch..lock her up..kill her..have her run away frm cops..I dun care how u do it?!..JUS DO IT!!!..Thnx 4this..POST SOON!!.
ahh!! oh man i’m so scared! What is Gina up to in all this? Alice better tell Dana wtf is going on and Dana needs to kick Lara’s ass. Seriously! AH this is such a great story, not like any i’ve read before. I love it! Update soon!
Like ackemat, I’m interested to find out how Gina deals with what Lara has done. Of course, the thing I’m most excited about is Dana finding out :), can we expect some action there?
I was disappointed to realize I missed your last chapter, so I had to hurry to catch up. I couldn’t stop reading. That last chapter blew me away, and this chapter made my heart ache. Poor Alice!That Lara is evil. If Dana doesn’t kill her, I just might. LOL. Like everyone else, I’m curious to see if Gina fit into what Lara did, or if she was left in the dark about it.I’m dying for the next chapter!
Oh man, wow is all i got to say and I cant wait for Dana to find out who put Alice in the state shes in, oooooooh and Gina too. this is getting better and better, thanks for the update!!
that was great but I hope that alice pulls out of this soon and that she makes lara pay for what she did please post soon I love it