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Masked Feelings CH 78 Unsettled
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Dana had Alice’s cell in her possession, just in case she tried to call. There were voicemails that hadn’t been listened to on the phone. She knew that it wasn’t right to listen to other people’s messages but maybe there was a clue to where she was. Dana went through them all, but they were all work related and offered no help. One of them was from Roxy, which didn’t surprise her at all. It was placed shortly after the tense moment that sent Alice walking out the door.
" Hey, darlin’…. I know you’re busy, but I just wanted to tell you how much I loved hearing your voice. We should get together soon. I miss our talks… I miss you. I hope you have a great day. I’ll be thinking of you…."
If she could reach through the phone, Roxy would have two hands tightly around her neck… squeezing the life out of her. Fantasizing about these thoughts of revenge wasn’t going to bring her closer to finding Alice. Dana placed a call and the voice at the other end was low and groggy.
Shane – Hello?
Dana – It’s me… again.
Shane – It’s after midnight, Dana.
Dana – I’m well aware of what time it is. You told me to call if Alice wasn’t home in a couple hours.
Shane sighs.
Shane – Are you at home?
Dana – No… I’ve been out looking for her.
Shane – Where did you look?
Dana – I’ve checked with all the people I can think of, her friends, her co-workers… you name it and I’ve checked it out. I even went as far as checking the hospitals.
Shane – I can meet you at your house if you want but I think you’ve done all you can. You should go home.
Dana – I can’t stop looking for her.
Shane – You can’t stay up all night looking for her, Dana… it’s a big city. She could be anywhere, maybe even out of town.
Dana – What if something happened to her?
Shane – I suggest you file a missing person’s report, if you’re that worried. Personally, I believe she doesn’t want to be found. Give her sometime, Dana. Alice won’t stay away forever.
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Hey hun, I just wanted you to know that my comment last time didn’t in any reflect on your skill as a writer. Hell, I know plenty of people who’ve stayed in abusive relationships (not that I’m saying this one is…well, maybe borderline emotionally) and you’re writing it well. And over the top isn’t meant to be an insult, you’d be a great drama writer for TV. All your chapters are very episodic, which is totally a compliment. Anyway, love this one and happy almost two years writing!
Great chapter!! All I can say is where the hell is Alice? Dana must have really struck a nerve!! I can’t say I blame her though because Alice didn’t deny anything she said. I hope she comes back so they can kiss and make up. Can’t wait for the halloween/anniversary edition.
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww, Roxy got bitten by a dog. I know for a fact that it hurts like hell. This chapter was full of drama and I love drama:-)) But I’m not a drama queen, lol. Alice’s exit was very dramatic when I stay on topic here. But it was the right decision to do so and I’m glad she followed through instead of having another long and exhausting conversation with Dana. If I were her I would act the same way. Leaving was exactly the best thing to do although it left Dana caught off guard, sad and speechless. That’s actually what I call a silent treatment. Where did Alice go though? To a striptease club to cheer herself up a bit? Guess, it wouldn’t be a great idea. Maybe she’s in one of Oprah Winfrey’s talk shows? Did she go to a psychologist to analyze her relationship with Dana? Or what would be even worse….she’s been kidnapped by Mr. Psycho and is being imprisoned in a dark, foul and sound proof basement with no possibility to escape. I wish I knew but I have no clue. Alice should take her time to think it all through considering what Roxy and Dana mean to her. She can’t trust both but she loves each woman differently and her feelings are beyond friendship when it comes to Roxy. This kinda scares me. Don’t want to think what might happen if Al chooses Roxy over Dana eventually. World War III. That’s what I see coming, lol. Hope it all works out at some point although I still believe (and yes, I’m repeating myself one more time) that Dana and Al should have a long break. You can kill me now, lol. I’m glad that the police didn’t find the drugs in Dana’s sports bag. Thanks to Kristen…she’ll get plus points for that, lol. Roxy must be very upset about it and now that she found out that Al’s missing she’ll be definitely trying to find her. Damn, Dana…get your ass in your car and search your woman! Can’t wait to see what you planned for your Halloween installment. Hope to see my favorite guy back:-)) And I don’t mean Tony, lol. This was an utterly kick-ass chapter. You never dissapoint, my dear. Just bring it on, lady. And by the way….the Red Sox suck!!!! No offense…but I had to say that, lol.
Therapy might work for Dana and Alice but they need time for that to work and they haven’t hardly anytime in almost two years to catch their breath with all the psychos coming after them. Hopefully Al is getting her head together and is not anywhere near David. pps
wow almost 2 years congratulations!! well done and every chapter has been better than the last ur a talent man good job!!!:) hmm where is alice im thinking motel her feelings were prob hurt, alone time for her perhaps? i hope so anyway poor dana she cant catch a break can she lol well as long as she has alice she’ll be fine another great chap cant wait for their halloween chap :)