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Masked Feelings CH# 8
Dana – Alice, I…..
Dana couldn’t find the words, what could she say.
Alice – Don’t bother….. Just leave me alone, Dana. Don’t come back, I’m through with this….I’m through with you.
The words stung so much more that the slap across the face but the damage to her heart was unrepairable.
Dana came home to an empty house, went to her bedroom and collapsed on the bed. Lara came home hours later with a bag of groceries, intending to cook the dinner that she promised Dana, the night before. Lara hadn’t seen Dana, but knew she was home. She found her laid out on the bed, asleep.
Lara – Dana.. Sweetie. Wake up.
Dana – Huh… oh, hi.
Lara – Are you feeling sick? You don’t look so good.
Dana – No, I’m not sick.
Lara- Well, something else is wrong then. I can see it in your face. Speaking of your face why is it so red?
Dana sighs.
Lara – I can tell you need a little time. I have started dinner. Why don’t you put something comfortable on and keep me company while I cook.
Dana nodded.
Lara – Good, I’ll see you in a few minutes.
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Alice pushed all thoughts aside and miraculously steam rolled through the stack of work before her. Feeling a sense of accomplishment when she finally finished.
Alice also felt good about standing up for herself, but at the same time feeling guilty, unsure why.
Lara was the the puzzling part about all this. How did she worm her way in to Dana’s life. I thought you were over her, Dana.
Alice was never Lara’s biggest fan. She tolerated her for Dana’s sake. To hear about the *****-capades with her was too much, what a great lover she was, GROSS! To her, she was kinda creepy, the stepford wife type of creepy. Not really knowing who she really was, cause she never shared anything about herself. Did Dana really know her? Who are you, Lara? And why does my skin crawl whenever your around?
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Lara put Dana to work. She could tell Dana was struggling with something, something to do with Alice. Lara got Dana engaged in small talk, hoping to get her to open up to her later, about everything. She really wanted to know about the couple days that Dana was gone. What she did and who she was with. Pretty confident that she already knew the “who she was with.” This would not be easy, she had that deer-in-the-headlights look. Lara would have to turn up the charm and treat her with kid gloves.
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(57 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
Don’t trust Lara, Dana! Run in the other direction! LOL.I really loved Dana’s note to Alice. It was so sweet and heartfelt. You’re doing a great job with this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great update! I love how Lara’s really manipulative- it’s easier to dislike her then…I hope Alice figures what Lara and Gina have been up. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
You’ve created a very cruel Lara, which makes it easier to root for Danish. I loved how you said ‘locked away in her hope chest.’ Please post soon, but don’t torture us too much =)
oh man, Dana Get the Hell outta there!!!!, Lara’s now a crazy b**** in my book. Alice seems to have a sixth sence about ppl, hope nuthin too crazy happens heh, thanks for the post, lookin forward to your next!! oh and happy holiday!
this just gets better and better please post soon so I can see what happens next love it
Great update. Man, it’s interesting to see this side of Lara, she’s so good at manipulating poor Danish. I hope it works out. The note was such a sweet touch, nice job. Can’t wait for more!
I just the things that stands in the way of Danish, makes the eventual hookup more than good. enjoying this, Happy Thanksgiving and looking forward to the ‘major’ event soon.
haha this is great… i love that lara is evil… mwa haha. keep writing! go alice!
locked away in her hope chest = a continued hope for danish’s love to prevail… ahhh Thankfully Alice is smart enough to realize that something isn’t quite rightI can’t wait to see what evil Lara has in store for Alice.
of course i don’t like the drama brteyes! lara’s really evil and delusional if she thinks that she can stand in the way of true love. danish belong together. it’ll be weird any other way. can’t wait for the next chapter. ^ – ^
loved the note dana left for alice. it was so sweet. it looks like it was enough to push alice in the right direction. Happy Thanksgiving!