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Masked Feelings CH# 8
Lara – Thanks for helping me with dinner. I really planned on doing it myself.
Dana – I didn’t do much.
Lara – Are you kidding me? We’d be eating at midnight if it weren’t for you.
Dana laughed.
Dana – Aren’t we exaggerating just a little?
Lara – Maybe… It was worth it, I made you laugh.
Dana – Yeah… You did.
Lara- Now, come on, lets eat before it gets cold.
Dana was doing much better during dinner but Lara still had to carry the conversation. Dana was going away from her again, she needed to act fast before the walls came back up again.
Lara cleared the dishes and Dana got up to help.
Lara – Lets leave the dishes til morning.
Dana – I can do them, it won’t take long.
Lara – Nope, can’t let you do it. We’ll take care of them tomorrow.
Lara took Dana’s hand and led her to the couch.
Lara – Would you like something to drink? Some tea, maybe.
Dana nodded with approval. Lara left for a few minutes and returned with the teapot and 2 cups. She poured Dana a cup and was ready to pry words from her mouth.
Lara – Dana, Look at me.
Dana looked up and placed her gaze on Lara’s face.
Lara- It’s so obvious to me that something is really bothering you. I truly believe if you can talk about it, you’ll feel so much better. We’re friends, Dana. I know if I needed someone to talk to you would be there for me. Don’t you know there isn’t anything you can’t tell me, and I do mean anything. No judgement, what so ever. If your worried about talking to me because of our past relationship, don’t. I’m here because I care about you and want you to be happy. The balls in your court. Do you want to be miserable or talk about it?
With that said, Dana started to cry uncontrolably. Lara took her in to her arms and held her til she stopped. When Dana finally did stop, Lara backed away and held her hand.
Lara – Dana, are you ok?
Dana – Yeah
Lara- Do you want to talk to me?
Dana – Yeah, but its hard to talk about.
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(57 votes, average: 4.04 out of 5)
Don’t trust Lara, Dana! Run in the other direction! LOL.I really loved Dana’s note to Alice. It was so sweet and heartfelt. You’re doing a great job with this story. I can’t wait for the next chapter!
Great update! I love how Lara’s really manipulative- it’s easier to dislike her then…I hope Alice figures what Lara and Gina have been up. Can’t wait to see what happens next!
You’ve created a very cruel Lara, which makes it easier to root for Danish. I loved how you said ‘locked away in her hope chest.’ Please post soon, but don’t torture us too much =)
oh man, Dana Get the Hell outta there!!!!, Lara’s now a crazy b**** in my book. Alice seems to have a sixth sence about ppl, hope nuthin too crazy happens heh, thanks for the post, lookin forward to your next!! oh and happy holiday!
this just gets better and better please post soon so I can see what happens next love it
Great update. Man, it’s interesting to see this side of Lara, she’s so good at manipulating poor Danish. I hope it works out. The note was such a sweet touch, nice job. Can’t wait for more!
I just the things that stands in the way of Danish, makes the eventual hookup more than good. enjoying this, Happy Thanksgiving and looking forward to the ‘major’ event soon.
haha this is great… i love that lara is evil… mwa haha. keep writing! go alice!
locked away in her hope chest = a continued hope for danish’s love to prevail… ahhh Thankfully Alice is smart enough to realize that something isn’t quite rightI can’t wait to see what evil Lara has in store for Alice.
of course i don’t like the drama brteyes! lara’s really evil and delusional if she thinks that she can stand in the way of true love. danish belong together. it’ll be weird any other way. can’t wait for the next chapter. ^ – ^
loved the note dana left for alice. it was so sweet. it looks like it was enough to push alice in the right direction. Happy Thanksgiving!