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Masked Feelings CH #9
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Alice – Thanks for coming over. I must seem like a total pain in the *****.
Tina – Not at all. I must say, my curiosity is getting the best of me though. Was I right about something going on with you and Dana on the patio?
Alice – Yeah, it all started with the earrings.
Tina – Earrings?
Alice – After the talk I had with you the last time, when I got to my car…. well, they were on the seat with a card. I wore them Friday night.
Tina – Oh, wow. I say those. They looked beautiful and very expensive. She must think an awful lot of you to give you such a gift. So…… what did I walk in on?
Alice – I was out on the patio when Dana came out. She whispered in my ear and I thought I was going to die. She wanted to dance with me, and we did. Tina, I never saw this side of Dana before, she was so sure of herself and so *****. Before I knew it, I was kissing her neck. Then she asked if she could kiss me. I found myself saying “yes.” It was so incredible……
Tina – Damn, I would have never guess things would progressed like they have.
Alice – Well, before you get too excited. Things have turned around since then.
Tina – What do you mean?
Alice – I caught Dana in bed with Lara. I heard her say “I love you” to her.
Tina – What?!
Alice – We got into a fight later…. I slapped her and said that I’m through with her.
Tina – You need to fill me in on all the details. Please tell me more…..
Alice told her how she walked in on them. Also fiiled Tina in on every little thing, including the card in her bag.
Tina – So what are you going to to about it?
Alice – What do you mean “what are you going to do about it?” Why should I do anything?
Tina – Alice, I know your angry and I understand that, but are you going to fight for her?
Alice – Fight for her? Why?
Tina – You need to say it, Alice. Tell me how you feel about Dana. You love her, don’t you? Don’t clam up on me. Say it out loud. Say it, Al!
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OMG!!!! What the hell?!? Jesus Lara is just freakin sick. I mean jeez if I was Alice, I would have kick her ass if she had lets me go. Its a real good story though please keep writing. I wanna find out what happens to Alice and if Dana finds out.
woah! brteyes, babe, you are unbelievable! you’re right i am a little upset with you, but i know you’ll make things better. what goes on in your head? that was some sick s**t you had lara put alice through. alice has to fight like hell to get to dana, and hopefully dana will be able to meet her halfway. thx for the update.
I must hand it to you, I certainly did not see that coming. Dana’s gonna kill Lara isn’t she? ;)
Pao, lol. In a more serious issue, the rape between two women is rarely writing, maybe because is difficult, nothing pleasant and not politically correct. Well I hope that Dana know who Lara is, and give her what she deserves.
Wow I did not see the psycho, blood-licking, rapist Lara coming…great story though. And can’t wait to see Alice expose Lara to Dana…that should be fun! Update soon!
Hmm..this was a tad creepy, but I liked it. I want to see where this is gonna go. Nice Job. Can’t wait to Dana finds out….
holding my comments, but hoping you’ll be able to update soon – you do know you’re killing me…
oh no poor alice I just hope that dana finds out soon
woah! this Lara is so sick, blood licking bloody sick. ur wtiting’s good. I’m gonna have to keep reading, sorry I found this fic late. But, still, just in case u were to check, I want to say that ur awesome:)