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Masked Feelings CH #9
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Alice – Yes!! I love Dana. Are you happy now?
Tina takes Alice in for a hug. Alice starts to cry.
Tina – I am happy for you. Don’t let pride get in the way of fighting for Dana. She loves you, too. You are made for each other. Lara doesn’t stand a chance, not a chance in *****….
Alice – You really mean that don’t you, that Dana and I are made for each other.
Tina – Yeah, I do. If you look in your heart, I know you’ll realize it too. Like I said take your time and decide what you want to do, but don’t take too long. Lara’s in the picture now and seeing how they never had closure on their relationship, they may decide to pick up where they left off.
Alice – Yeah, I hear you.
Tina – I hope you do, cause your happiness may depend on it. Well, Alice, I have to go. Please call me if you need me.
Alice – I will. Thanks, Tina.
Tina – Your welcome. I hope to hear from you soon. Hopefully, with some good news.
Alice – Well, we’ll see. Hey, you better go and I have a whole day of housework.
Tina – I feel for you…
Alice – Well, you could help..
Tina – Can’t hear you… I’m out the door already…
Alice – Chicken! (laughing)
Alice decided she would do a load of laundry, then start in the kitchen. She went to the hamper and started to sort the clothes. She would do the occasional article of clothing for Gina, now and again. This time there was a pair of pants. She always checked the pockets, there was something in them.
At first look she thought it was a business card. It was the same size but not a business card at all. She read it. ” Dearest Alice, Please forgive me, much love, Dana.” It instantly came to her. The flowers were from you, not Gina. I should have figured it out. You’re the only one that really knows me. You know me better than I know myself. She was angry at Gina for lying to her about it and would confront her when she saw her again. Alice went to the phone.
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OMG!!!! What the hell?!? Jesus Lara is just freakin sick. I mean jeez if I was Alice, I would have kick her ass if she had lets me go. Its a real good story though please keep writing. I wanna find out what happens to Alice and if Dana finds out.
woah! brteyes, babe, you are unbelievable! you’re right i am a little upset with you, but i know you’ll make things better. what goes on in your head? that was some sick s**t you had lara put alice through. alice has to fight like hell to get to dana, and hopefully dana will be able to meet her halfway. thx for the update.
I must hand it to you, I certainly did not see that coming. Dana’s gonna kill Lara isn’t she? ;)
Pao, lol. In a more serious issue, the rape between two women is rarely writing, maybe because is difficult, nothing pleasant and not politically correct. Well I hope that Dana know who Lara is, and give her what she deserves.
Wow I did not see the psycho, blood-licking, rapist Lara coming…great story though. And can’t wait to see Alice expose Lara to Dana…that should be fun! Update soon!
Hmm..this was a tad creepy, but I liked it. I want to see where this is gonna go. Nice Job. Can’t wait to Dana finds out….
holding my comments, but hoping you’ll be able to update soon – you do know you’re killing me…
oh no poor alice I just hope that dana finds out soon
woah! this Lara is so sick, blood licking bloody sick. ur wtiting’s good. I’m gonna have to keep reading, sorry I found this fic late. But, still, just in case u were to check, I want to say that ur awesome:)