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MET Obsession
Chapter 5: Chance Encounter
As Tina turned down the hall leading towards the woman’s bathroom, she frowned in disappointment at the long line that had already formed. “Twenty minutes may have been too optimistic.” She thought.
“Tina?” A male voice shouted.
Tina turned around in response to her name being called and immediately spotted David’s co-worker Brillo. His real name was Sam but everyone called him Brillo because of his very thick, very wiry and very curly head of black hair.
“Brillo what are you doing here? This is the last place I would have expected to bump into you tonight.” said Tina.
“Don’t believe everything David tells you. I bailed on him one time and he’s had it out for me ever since. I’m actually a fan of this genre of music.” Sam laughed.
“Geez this line is terrible. I hope you paced yourself.” Sam said.
“If worse comes to worst, just point me towards the broom closet and I’ll find the means to manage the situation.” Tina replied jokingly.
“I think I can do better by you than a broom closet.” Sam replied.
Tina followed Brillo through the hallway and a series of doors that led to steps. Because she had to navigate the stairs in her high heels she fell behind Brillo who had darted up ahead of her. When Tina reached the top of the stairs, she found Brillo was talking to a short enormously muscled young man.
“I guess this is where we say our goodbyes. I’m sorry Tina but I’m meeting the Q Ginger guy for an interview. My buddy Eddie here says you can use the office bathroom.” Sam said.
Tina thanked Sam and Eddie and entered the bathroom. It was larger than she expected and was surprisingly clean except for a small puddle of water under the sink. There was a urinal, a sink, a bench and thankfully an enclosed toilet stall. Tina relieved herself, washed her hands and pulled out a deep red lipstick from her clutch. As Tina began applying the lipstick she heard the bathroom door open. An image of the urinal popped into her head.
“Oh no, I forgot this is a mens bathroom.” She thought.
Tina quickly replaced the cover on her lipstick and placed it in her clutch. As she raised her head and glanced in the mirror above the sink a rush of adrenaline over took her.
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Kat, welcome aboard. Nice to see you spreading your writing wings here. Very sweet short story. I’m with Bette, a public restroom is not the ideal place for a first kiss, but what a kiss it was. I hope you write more stories and share them with us. Keep on writing, you have a talent.
p.s., glad you took the advice (yes, that was me).
Thanks Cella. I appreciate the advice and was pleasantly surprised to find your response here. I am exploring all of the tips you listed elsewhere.
I just started the writing thing and am looking forward to creating more tales.
Hi! Story looking interesting.
I understand it’s a single part tale, but maybe you’ll want to continue?
Hi Zhenya,
I will definitely consider expanding the story. To be honest, I have not plotted out the rest of the story. I will need to put on my thinking cap before I post additional chapters of this story.
Hi Kat, welcome aboard!
It was a short story but very well written and i hope for more.
Sincerly bibi28
Thanks Bibi28.
Hi, Welcome Aboard,
I think this has the makings of a longer story.
Enjoyed reading it and your characters are well written.
Thank you, hope to read more.
SG
Thank you SassyGran. I’m glad you found the characters and story entertaining.
Hello Kat and Welcometo the site. Enjoyed your story, certainly hope you expand this story,please keep Tina from bolting from Bette and Kit. She needs to stay and talk to them maybe in Kit’s dressing room or someplace other than the bathroom. Very interesting story. Please continue. Thanks for posting.
I agree, these girls need to get the heck out of that restroom.
There is the David setup an interview factor. So we should learn more about Kits past and her estrangement from her father. Many possibilities need to be explored and plotted for TiBette too before the next installment.
Thank you letting me know you enjoyed the story.
Great story and I want to read more. Maybe Bette invites Tina to her apartment for a stir fry dinner??
Hmm…I think you may have tapped into something. LOL.
Great and PLEEEEEZE do not let Candace anywhere near the museum!!!!!
This was a refreshing one off, haven’t seen this in a long while so good job!
Thank you CestMoi.