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“Oh god……. take your time…….”
I remember that song……..I remember…..
Ch 11
In the shadowplay acting your own death knowing no more….
“Oh god…….” She moans. Lips on my ear. She isn’t going to last much longer and it’s a shame. The sweat on her forehead, slick that valley in between her breasts, pointed peaks of her nipples…like tiny pebbles in my mouth. That feel of her closing in tight around my fingers that pull, if I could only feel it the way she does….but that could be said about so many things.
I stay with her in her till she stops beating. I kiss her soft while I wait. This was the part with her that made me miss her the most. Outside world tuned out. Just her and me. Nothing but the sound of us kissing or fucking….maybe laughing if we weren’t feeling too intense about it. The laughing was rare but we did….sometimes.
She strokes my face while I kiss her. God I didn’t plan on missing her this way. So much of her being gone was wrapped up in my anger toward her. My bitterness. I could forget these moments with her. It made it easier. Way easier to hate her than love her. But I do love her. I love her so much that….I don’t even know anymore I get so fucking lost in it.
I only have 1 hour to get ready for the race. I kiss her slow and sweet. She tries again to pull me under so I won’t go but I have to go.
“Carmen I gotta get ready…..they are going to need me for the race…..’
“Shane we have to finish this……don’t you think?”
“Well yeah I mean look you know I am a glutton for punishment….”
“Shane, I don’t want you to feel like you are being punished by being with me. I made a mistake. I don’t know how many ways I can apologize for it…”
“I know Carm I know…I am just saying that you have a tendency to hurt me first then ask the questions…..but I am not any better. Look let me finish this race it’s a nice pay day…and I’ll say goodbye to the guys….I’ll go home with you….and we will talk….it doesn’t mean anything….”
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You make my day!!!! Very, very good!!!!! I would love to see Shane getting blind, from a head trauma. Just to see how she was going to adjust and how Carmen was going to help her go through it. I love Drama!!!! Obrigado!!! :-)
Damn you and your traumatic drama!!! LOL, I love it. I just hope Shane doesn’t wind up disabled or without her memory…that’s a Pandora’s box waiting to explode. I’m curious to know what comes next and well, this made my day. :D PPS!
Metal bar sticking out of her?! Jesus! That’s gotta hurt, yeah? At least she can still feel her legs, no paralyzation. Shane’s tough as nails. . . no, tougher. I have faith that she’ll pull through. Awesome update, by the way. Fricken incredible.
Yeah! finally caught up – Man what an awesome series of stories…. all so fantastically written. I cannot believe you stopped it there!!! you’d better post more asap. Love it!
NDF!!! You’re mean! cmon now… lol poor shane and poor carmen… loved it. f-awsome!
Awesome.
Aww… poor Shane! Hope she`ll get better soon! I loved this chapter, you`re just an awesome writer! Please keep going girl! ;-)
i think maybe i am a devil. why i love poor and hurt sharmen. but i am still a good girl. i also love a happy ending story. haha.. thanks you for sharing your talent.
GEE-ZUS! Can’t Shane ever escape w/o having a lifelong scar to show for it? Yikes! At least Shane realizes her future is w/ Carmen, lets just hope she lives to have it. Loved it.