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Missing. 7
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“So kid………. I am your motherfucking conscience. All of this is part of some deep seeded….rooted…. serious emotional problem you have with yourself stemming from a murder you committed. So let’s have it out once and for all or maybe just maybe you might get stuck here in this crazy place….I know for a fact that this is the last goddamned place you want to be. You see that….”
The Nightline guy points to Carmen.
“Yeah….”
“Ok. That is where you should be yeah?”
“Yeah…”
“So once and for all…..why did you kill Fast Eddie?”
“I killed him to get even for every bad thing that ever happened to me.”
“Yes you did. Did you feel bad about it?”
“No…not at first.”
“Would you say that you have lived on the darker side of things as a result of your choice?”
“Yes.”
“Would you say that maybe that little lady over there has a point and maybe you drink a little too much?”
“Yes.”
“Would you say that maybe that is something you can work on?”
“Yes.”
“Ok so….lets look at the good things you have done. You love that girl yeah?”
“God…do I…”
“You love her kid?”
“Yeah….I love him a lot…..”
“Thank god you love at all…”
“Yeah.”
“So you made a mistake. You are very sorry. And if you had to go back and do it again?”
“I would do it again.”
“Exactly.”
“It made me the person I am now.”
“Exactly.”
“I realize that it is wrong. I know that it is wrong. But it was something that I had to do to survive.”
“Exactly…it’s a complicated situation.”
“It is.”
“So are you ready? Are you ready to live your life for her? To give her everything and more?”
“Yeah…I am ready”
“You know it’s a honorable thing you have done….you didn’t have to love her….she isn’t the woman you fell in love with…”
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Just got caught up…awesome as always! Love to see how they progress from this point on!
look you are the greatest writer there is ok !!! you are my fucking inspiration for real!!! i hope you get better . For the ending this story yea im very sad cause this is my reason to keep reading fanfic for real.. i do read but this just gets me pumping haha i loved this story and will always be my fav . still lovin it the updates are great. i dont think you sude stop writing cause your great i have told you before your the fucking best. Dont stop!! I love your other stories to dont get me wrong all of them are fucking tastic and i for sure will be reading enything you write. Maybe your right i mean i this stpry keeps giong and someday has to stop but let me tell you the intencity never stopped it keot getting better and better. I’ved cried laughed with this storie and man i think im gonna start reading it again!!! ok im gonna stop now. i hope you get better good luck with your muisc but dont stop writing!!! again you’re the best
I really don’t even know what to say…I’m in shock and probably denial as well…the thought of not being able to log on and read a new chapter of…anything by New Dawn Fades is, well…depressing. I don’t normally post here (why, I don’t really know) but I nearly fell off my chair when I read that you may be gone for good. This story arc has been one of the best things I’ve ever read…and I ‘m not just talking fanfics…I mean one of the best of EVERYTHING I’ve ever read. While I knew this arc had to end at some point (and I suppose if I’m honest with myself I’ve felt it coming), but you’ve also written so many other great stories (Now I’m Nothing, Night Returning, La Mer, Grey Hotel) that I guess I just figured I would still be able to get my NDF fix. So basically what I’m trying to say is…you are an amazingly talented writer and I will continue to thoroughly enjoy reading your work for as long as you afford me the privilege. I really hope you feel better…and thank you!
I hope you deciding to disappear for good is the fatique & delirium talking from you being sick. Seriously though I’m sure you need the mental rest from the wonderful stories that you’ve given us, so I ain’t mad at ya. Hope the muse hits you again. Will it be too optimistic of me too think we’ll get more of ‘Grey Hotel’. It’s been amazing reading your AU stories about my favorite couple from the L Word, at least you still have a few more updates to go. Thanx
Fucking amazing! This could totally be turned into a movie you know, all your series and stories. All of it’s very clever and well written, great job!
You’ll be gone? You’ll be missed if you go. Really. And about the whole thing of topping yourself, every time you finish a part to this storyline, I think the same thing. I think that there’s no way it can get any better. No way. But then you write something like Scorpio Rising, then you write A means to an End, then you write Missing, and I’m proven wrong every time. But if you feel that this epic is coming to a close, then you’d be right to have it come to its natural end instead of dragging it along and having the story suffer. Just know that if you find new inspiration, you’ll have *much* support, and your other stories will get much support as well. Oh, almost forgot to mention: I loved the update (and knowing that it’s one of the last updates, I appreciate it even more).
Well, that gives new meaning to the terms “shock therapy” ! Looking forward to the next chapters… For as long as they keep coming. Thank you for this.
To say that you will be missed if this is the end of the line would be a severe understatement! Your writing is always fresh and unpredictible and this sage has been a joy to read. I hope that you continue to feel better and find new inspirations.